The Green River

The river lazily ran through the lovely pasture scene.
Poets wrote their pretty poems about the river’s charms,
Carrying its living water, reflecting purest green
As lovers sat upon its banks, locked in each other's arms.

Way back in nineteen Eighty Two, idly pleasure boating,
He chanced on unexpected sight of homicidal death.
This man discovered horror beneath the surface floating,
So shocking to his senses that he almost lost his breath. 

He’d discovered the first body of victims known to date
Of dread Green River killer, Gary Ridgeway is his name.
Sixteen years to catch him, the murders stand at forty-eight.
With waters tinged with  red, the pretty river’s not the same.

Won no. 4 in contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/21/2013 9:32:00 PM
Joyce, Congratulations, with your winning poem. Thank you for supporting my "Green" contest. Always :-) Linda
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Date: 7/7/2011 1:45:00 PM
Wow! What a story, Joyce. Many cograts on your SUPER WIN, Lainie
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Date: 7/5/2011 2:54:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest, Joyce
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Date: 7/5/2011 5:33:00 AM
Joyce, a different way to go with this contest..Sad that this happened but you have exposed the other side of the human that can possess a person and run uncontrolled when humans are not controlled by the love of God..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 7/5/2011 4:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in Barbara's "A River Runs Through It contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/4/2011 3:06:00 PM
beauty can be just on the surface..and can also lull one into a false sense of safety, this verse is a very clear reminder of that! Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/4/2011 1:47:00 PM
Many congratulations, Joyce : ) Wow, chilling piece - is it a true story?
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Date: 7/4/2011 1:49:00 AM
OMG an unusual take on the theme ....well done Joyce.....congratulations on your win
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Date: 7/4/2011 12:40:00 AM
wow, Joyce, I thought this was gonna be an idyllic little poem on the Green River and you turned it into a blood bath. ME LIKES. It's good to get gruesome from time to time! Congratulations, lady.
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Date: 7/3/2011 10:15:00 PM
what a wonderful entry Joyce, congrats on your 4th place win
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Date: 7/3/2011 9:27:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on a wonderful win in the river contest with this expressive entry my friend.. enjoy a grand celebration and win luv..
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Date: 7/3/2011 8:59:00 PM
Scarey..but oh so well written..congrats on your placement in my contest. BG
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Date: 6/29/2011 4:35:00 AM
oh so sad the tale of that murderous chap ..the Lifetime movie airs frequently.. ..a stirring write incorporates the beauty of the Green River Joyce.. lovely entry with many facets ..good luck my friend...luv..
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Date: 6/28/2011 6:18:00 PM
nicely done!!! good luck in the contest. cory
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Date: 6/27/2011 12:03:00 PM
Wonderful rhyming and a stunning entry, Joyce
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