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The Great King

He was the great king A mid-life crisis Not going to war Restless couldn't sleep Up on the roof spies... She a soldier's Wife, at home lone Beautiful was She, taking bath Temptation Calling him, Sent for her She came Sinned Wept (Based on "The Bible" loosely interperted)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/18/2009 4:51:00 AM
Few lines, great interpretation of the classic but all too true story of David and Bathsheba. Keep writing and thanks for the comments. Doug
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Date: 8/12/2009 10:59:00 AM
Super write Sara>>James
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Date: 8/11/2009 12:05:00 PM
If she was his wife why was it sin? Light & Love
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