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Here forsaken souls are gathered; Gathered in night’s cold wrap of woe. Woe to those who now are treading; Treading the paths that lead them here. Written June 7, 2015 by Andrea Dietrich For the "Four Lines Only" Poetry Contest of nette onclaud Based on visual number 3

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Jennifer Walker

Date: 6/17/2015 9:28:00 PM

Four lines that bring the picture to life.

Constance La France

Date: 6/16/2015 5:21:00 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your win in the contest with this awesome poem 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, where bluebirds sing, not for a contest, just me feeling sad today and thinking too much, so being "a poet" I pour the emotion into a poem

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/14/2015 3:07:00 PM

Well there can be no woe in this winners heart, congrats Andrea..'

David Fisher

Date: 6/13/2015 8:32:00 PM

Congrats on the contest! Such an eerie picture and your poem captures it well.

Mark Trichet

Date: 6/13/2015 1:55:00 AM

Hey Andrea loved this four liner, well done!

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/12/2015 11:10:00 PM

Andrea,Congratulations on your win:) Alexis

Skat A

Date: 6/12/2015 7:39:00 PM

Andrea, Congratulations on your 4 line win. Hugs SKAT

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/12/2015 5:57:00 PM

This has a spooky touch to it, but I like it! It matches the visual well. Congrats on your win, Andrea! Love, Kim

Jan Allison

Date: 6/12/2015 3:10:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Edward Ebbs

Date: 6/12/2015 7:28:00 AM

Congrats Andrea!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/11/2015 9:12:00 PM

This is written very well with such a limit of four lines, you were able to convey the haunting emotions of the picture well. 7

Monterey Sirak

Date: 6/11/2015 12:35:00 PM

Eerie feelings to your poem to match a super scary picture. I am expecting a ghost to dart out from between the gravestones or from between your words.

Daver Austin

Date: 6/10/2015 1:25:00 PM

Niccolo Paganini, great Italian violin virtuoso of the romantic period, played in the graveyards for the dead and they thought him in league with the devil, when he actually thought he was doing a good thing. I think he would have liked your poem. Love, daver

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 6/9/2015 9:09:00 PM

G'day Andrea... doesn't pay to think too far ahead in a graveyard. Your poem is kind of spooky but full of truth - thanks Andrea - Lindsay

Kelly Deschler

Date: 6/9/2015 6:44:00 PM

The melancholy mood of this poem suits this visual perfectly... Very nicely penned, Andrea! Good luck in Nette's contest!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/8/2015 7:25:00 PM

very effective, andrea! your words match the picture perfectly!

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/8/2015 9:27:00 AM

Andrea, this is a great write for the contest.. Absolutely love it! Good luck to you :) luv Wilma

John Lawless

Date: 6/8/2015 7:08:00 AM

Andrea, I love the circular path of this poem...the specter that awaits us all. Well done.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/8/2015 6:15:00 AM

- I do not want to be there one a dark night alone :))) - Great poem, Andrea - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 6/8/2015 2:02:00 AM

You captured the mood and image perfectly - I especially love the imagery in the second line - chilling! Hugs jan xx:-) Hugs jan xx 7

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 6/8/2015 1:53:00 AM

You have captured beautifully "the situation, the theme and the mood" to make it a perfect scene fetching A7. Love and best wishes dear friend. ..Ravindra K Kapoor

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/7/2015 11:06:00 PM

You captured creepy in just four lines.

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/7/2015 11:03:00 PM

Darkly beautiful, Andrea. I see how it's done correctly now, that even the first word should be same as the last word of the last line. Blessings!

Viv Wigley

Date: 6/7/2015 10:55:00 PM

a lovely spoonful of darkness, Andrea. Good luck in the compp. Viv x