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December 5, 2023      9.14am

Colorful leaves covered the hills and plains, Like stars in scarlet, yellow and orange; Everywhere are bright trees boasting in chains Of hues spreading rapidly in wide range. Everyone loves to walk and go around, Immersing on each hue’s bursting ardor; Children jump, roll, swim and play on the ground, Rodents hide and peek under leaves’ splendor. Lovers enjoy the place as paradise, Under those trees seats their love, so divine; As confetti leaves rain, kisses suffice, Fall’s aromas bless all bonds, loves entwine. Fall’s grandeur is a huge gem of nature, All scenes are precious moments to capture.

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Date: 12/26/2023 12:32:00 AM
Any theme Any form Contest Judged: 12/7/2023 8:24:00 AM Sponsored by: Sotto Poet Place 2 ( up to 2 multi-w)
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Date: 12/7/2023 8:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A colorful/fun write/story. Love It. Hugs... Have a wonderful day with your win...............
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Len Gasun
Date: 12/26/2023 12:34:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem, your uplifting words and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Paula. God bless you always and your writings, Hugs
Date: 12/7/2023 1:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Len Gasun
Date: 12/26/2023 12:33:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend SO. Blessings to you always. Hugs
Date: 12/4/2023 10:43:00 PM
Love the imagery and your word choices. Great job!
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Len Gasun
Date: 12/5/2023 5:32:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words my dear poet friend. God bless you always. I'll drop by to you so soon. Hugs

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