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"The god head, "Couldn't!"

Pharaoh divine, Amenhotep the fourth, Could explain very own Sphinx head of course, Having anchored in Mars, His head stares at the stars, Made only Mars, no divinity source! They say proof is always in the pudding, Or to tell you this story I wouldn’t, One day in precept’s cars, We’ll drive around on Mars, Viewing the Sphinx, the god head that couldn't! For Contest, ”Sphinx Head on Mars In Honor Of: Carolyn Devonshire

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Date: 9/23/2010 12:34:00 PM
Many congratulations John on your win in Carolyn's fine contest with this Limerick gem >> James
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Date: 9/23/2010 5:47:00 AM
Congratulations John for your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Sphinx Head on Mars?". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2010 3:08:00 AM
Wonderful double limerick, John. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 9/22/2010 9:16:00 PM
This one was super duper! congatuatlions, john. great limerick beat to.
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Date: 9/22/2010 8:53:00 PM
Many congratulations on this win for this amazing poem.
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Date: 9/22/2010 4:48:00 PM
Dear John, what a great double limerick you wrote here! Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest. Thanks for your comments too.
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Date: 9/22/2010 2:39:00 PM
Congratulations on this fine win in the contest, John
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Date: 9/22/2010 2:12:00 PM
A great writing.and win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/22/2010 1:27:00 PM
Congrats John on your big win in this contest.. a wonderful write my friend.. enjoy with luv...
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Date: 9/22/2010 11:01:00 AM
Very clever and insightful, John. Tonight I may dream about driving around on Mars "in precept's cars." Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/19/2010 9:34:00 AM
CUTE, john, The god head that couldn't. I like that play on words. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/14/2010 2:37:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with these well written Limericks that read like winners to me..I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my work..Have an enjoyable evening..Sara
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Date: 9/12/2010 5:53:00 PM
Well expressed thoughts on the Sphinx head On Mars, John
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Date: 9/12/2010 2:46:00 PM
Very clever Limerick, John..and I do believe one day we will be driving around on Mars..Lol..Wishing you good luck i n Carolyn's contest.. Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 9/12/2010 12:42:00 PM
:) Thanks for supporting the contest, John! Love, Carolyn
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