The Girl With the Dragon Tattoo

The girl with the dragon tattoo
I once  knew her
And so did you 
She came around
When the circus 
Came to town 
She was happy 
And she was gay
At least she seemed
  That way.


Though when she 
Was alone at night
He always came to her 
From out of her dreams
He was a boy she once knew
A boy she met out of  school
He was handsome and kind.
He told her that he loved her 
And that's all she knew! 


Her father told her she can't go with him
Because he is way too old  for you
You are my jewel and you are free
Though with him you would never be
For he is wise to the ways of this world.
You are my innocent plucked from the sea.


Your mother's heart would break 
If she knew you left with him
For she once met a boy like him
He broke her heart all the way through
Then I said come with me
Rest your heart against mine
I'll show you I'm not that boy  
The boy who took it for free
You came to me 8 months later
My jewel  of the sea 
So I say to you  again 
You cannot go with him!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Beaufort Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 6:39 AM
A lot of interesting possibilities here for me to fathom. Once a path is taken, there is no going back. How different we would have been is no matter since there are other choices ahead as well. Time an d wisdom are such a strange gift pair.
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 3:27 PM
HI, Debbie, I enjoyed your story about this girl. Different from what I expected. I wrote one with this title after seeing the movie of the same name. Did you see the movie? it's really exciting!
Duncan Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 6:36 PM
No I did not see the movie ;}
A   Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 9:17 PM
Debbie, I'd seen the movie ,,, now i've read your poem... nothing good comes out of rebellion ways... enjoyed~PD
Duncan Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 3:17 PM
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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 9:31 AM
Must have missed this one earlier. We never know right or wrong until we look back in the long run. Vince
Brown Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 11:34 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Debbie. Love, Carol
Babcock Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 8:56 AM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week. God Bless Phyl
Mehta Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 6:02 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Debbie
Chappell Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 5:31 PM
very strong piece here my friend
Brown Avatar
November 9, 2010 at 10:56 AM
Enjoyed reading your well written poetry today Debbie. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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