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The Ghost of My Lonely

Abandoned in the fifties after the war A freight elevator stuck between floors Obsolete machinery, splintered old chairs In a warehouse in Newark, New Jersey somewhere Dead air presses down, stifling and thick Something still dwells behind one of those bricks Curled up in a ball, it waits for me there In a warehouse in Newark, New Jersey somewhere A musty gray vapor that whispers my name It seeps through the wall and creeps to my brain It sighs and it groans as my soul is laid bare In a warehouse in Newark, New Jersey somewhere It mumbles and moans and drones of ancient tombs Of claustrophobic closets and dim, hollow rooms I cry out for help, echoes answer my prayer In a warehouse in Newark, New Jersey somewhere The ghost of my lonely, my lost and alone My hopeless and helpless, my can't go back home It's looking at me now with a dull, vacant stare In a warehouse in Newark, New Jersey somewhere

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/26/2017 11:23:00 PM
Tim, this WINNING poem is REALLY gripping and skillfully-written! Janice
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Date: 9/26/2017 11:04:00 PM
Congratulations, Tim on your placement. This is a wonderful poem.
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Date: 9/26/2017 6:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Old buildings, abandoned hospitals, all have an eerie feel about them. You can sense it from the outside. I think maybe you refer to the homeless runaways in your poem even. This is a very good write and I like the repeating of the line.
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Date: 9/26/2017 4:35:00 PM
Tim, a wonderful and sort of creepy write, congratulations on your win !!
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Date: 9/26/2017 4:05:00 PM
Dammit Tim....this had me looking over my shoulder.....The repeated line is like an unseen door slamming behind the reader.....hastening his eyes to read quickly.....and get out fast.
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Date: 2/25/2017 12:55:00 AM
An amazing write, Tim...I got chills when reading it! Congrats on this win. I haven't seen around here or on FB. I hope you're doing well. Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/23/2017 7:23:00 PM
Tim here I am again, maybe third time since you posted this golden oldie. Congrats again, dear friend and I hope you are doing well.
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Date: 2/22/2017 6:42:00 PM
Creepy and scary, and with the repeated line has the feeling of an old ballad. Congrats on your placement, Tim.
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Date: 2/22/2017 4:10:00 PM
Really well done, Tim - a smooth and powerful setting of mood.
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Date: 9/18/2016 1:45:00 AM
Tim, Congratulations on your sweet win. Thank you so much for the support. Stop by my blog "CERTIFYING OLD AGE (and a baby)" if you'd like. Always & Forever..... LINDA
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Date: 9/17/2016 1:08:00 AM
This caught my attention because of its form. I've never heard of it but it seems like something I'd like to try. Thank you.. Jenni
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Date: 6/8/2016 8:17:00 AM
Greetings Tim. Congrats for your well deserved first placement in the contest, with this awesome piece!! ;-)
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Date: 6/7/2016 12:54:00 PM
Congratulations, Tim, on your top place with your very atmospheric piece. Barry
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Date: 6/7/2016 10:22:00 AM
Congratulations Tim! Great write!
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Date: 6/7/2016 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations Tim, great piece...
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Date: 6/7/2016 7:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your top spot Tim.
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Date: 6/7/2016 5:49:00 AM
This is superb Tim! Congratulations on your first place deserving win! #7 ; )
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Date: 6/6/2016 11:09:00 PM
Congratulations! Enjoyed!
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Date: 6/6/2016 10:05:00 PM
Great write and congratulations!! Larry
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Date: 6/6/2016 9:36:00 PM
I had a feeling I read this before, the creepy sensation that covered me while I read was still as fresh as the first time. This is a fantastic write, thank you for entering it! ;)
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Date: 6/6/2016 7:36:00 PM
Great writing and a great win. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/6/2015 9:40:00 PM
I remember this from one of my previous contests and it was good to see it on the winner's list once again. This deserves to be there, Tim... I love atmospheric poems like this. The rhyming and rhythm of the poem is just excellent! Congrats on a great win!
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Date: 11/16/2015 9:14:00 PM
Hi Tim, you are so sweet. Happy to be on the same winning list. Congratulations. Love SKAT
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Date: 11/16/2015 12:36:00 PM
I would place this as a number one !! Excellent!! New or older poem.......it deserves to be read again
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Date: 11/16/2015 10:19:00 AM
Congrats Tim on the ghost of your lonely self in a warehouse in Newark or wherever!
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