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The Queen of fairies fell asleep upon a bed of thistledown. And didn't notice the hours creep as she dreamt of a golden gown. She was to meet the setting sun, so she waited with bated breath. For at dusk, they will merge as one and together conquer death. Darkness shrouds the sun as it dies, draping the night in ebony. But, she was too sleepy to rise, and missed her date with destiny. She woke to find there was no sun, its light would never shine again. And such things couldn't be undone, despite her overwhelming pain. She sent her magic to the sky, but all the stars silently fell. And alone, she began to cry, like she'd opened the gates of Hell. (Quatrain) 6/19/2015

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Date: 5/26/2018 9:15:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Emile.
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Date: 5/27/2018 7:30:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/22/2015 5:22:00 AM
dark deep and full of despair Emile fantastic write gl in contest hugs 7
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Date: 6/22/2015 8:36:00 AM
Thanks again Shadow, I appreciate all of your support. Emile.
Date: 6/19/2015 6:56:00 PM
Wow, what a dark tale from such a benign prompt! Great imagery...a seven
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Date: 6/19/2015 7:07:00 PM
Thanks David, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/19/2015 5:27:00 PM
Emile, beautifully penned poem 7 love the dreamy feel and thanks for visiting my poem, the weathered door
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Date: 6/19/2015 7:08:00 PM
Thanks Broken, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/19/2015 5:24:00 PM
I like the lines and how you penned it so brilliant. So sad touched full imagery, good luck in the contest...........A.M.
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Date: 6/19/2015 7:09:00 PM
Thanks Afolabi, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/19/2015 4:47:00 PM
A well told tale in rhyme, Emile! Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/19/2015 7:09:00 PM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/19/2015 2:30:00 PM
This is lovely, sad and moving, Emile. A story well told in rhyme. Very fitting for a fantasy theme. Excellent visual to accompany it! // paul
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Date: 6/19/2015 7:09:00 PM
Thanks Paul, I appreciate your support. Emile.

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