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The Full June Moon

You hang on a velvet black sky
Your beauty makes me want to sigh
Wearing a halo of stars
I bet you can see mars
The full June moon makes me want to cry
Date Written:6/5/2022
8 Place
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The Moon in June (Choose One of Five Forms) Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

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Date: 6/20/2022 12:50:00 AM
Your imagery is terrific; congratualations!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/20/2022 8:48:00 AM
Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.............
Date: 6/18/2022 2:50:00 PM
Nice place in the contest, Paula. I enjoyed your Limerick. Hugs, Bill
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/19/2022 11:34:00 AM
Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you enjoyed my fun Limerick write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.............
Date: 6/17/2022 7:39:00 AM
Nice entry for the contest, well done...Delice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/17/2022 8:04:00 AM
Thank You, for your visit. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you enjoyed this fun write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.............
Date: 6/14/2022 3:44:00 PM
A luxurious and elegant portrayal of the velvety skies of June, Paula. Congratulations on your win, Evelyn :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/15/2022 10:17:00 AM
Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you enjoyed this June write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.............
Date: 6/14/2022 1:05:00 PM
Lovely write Paula, Congrats on your win
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/14/2022 1:18:00 PM
Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you enjoyed my write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.............
Date: 6/13/2022 12:12:00 AM
Thanks for your participation, Paula. I enjoyed seeing your limerick. Congrats for your win in my contest.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/13/2022 7:52:00 AM
Thank You, for your visit and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win in your wonderful contest. Glad you enjoyed this fun June Moon write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a great/blessed~~day/week writing away.............
Date: 6/8/2022 3:45:00 PM
This was well done. I enjoyed reading it twice... Ann
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/9/2022 12:11:00 PM
Thanks for your visit. Glad you enjoyed this write and read it twice. WOW!!! Twice. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Date: 6/8/2022 2:57:00 PM
So lovely, Paula! Janice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/9/2022 12:09:00 PM
Thanks for your visit. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Date: 6/8/2022 1:56:00 AM
Nicely done Paula...Delice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/8/2022 11:28:00 AM
Thanks for your visit. Glad you like this June Moon one. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Date: 6/7/2022 3:39:00 PM
I love the "halo of stars." Sounds like a winner to me. Have a blessed day.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/8/2022 11:27:00 AM
Thanks for your visit. Glad you love this write. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Date: 6/6/2022 8:05:00 PM
Lovely!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/7/2022 8:35:00 AM
Thanks for your visit. Glad you enjoyed this write. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Date: 6/5/2022 5:13:00 PM
Very pretty!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/6/2022 11:57:00 AM
Thanks for your visit. Have a blessed day.............