The Frightening Dream

Walking in the twilight with my darling, hand in hand,
Was a joy beyond description, all sweethearts will understand.

We were laughing without reason, stopping now and then to kiss.
Only those who love as we do could know ecstasy like this.

Suddenly the dark had deepened and I felt an eerie chill.
His fingers tightened on my hand and pulled me closer still.

It was unlike a common blackout as electric power goes down,
When there is still a bit of natural light to turn the black to brown.

This darkness was an absolute, no stray gleam anywhere,
As if the sun, the moon, the stars were all no longer here.

My dear one was now dragging me, I could no longer walk.
I tried to phrase a protest but my tongue refused to talk.

The whole world had been silenced to degree I’d never known
As though completely vanished and we two were all alone.

Though I was void of any feelings as my darling ran in fear,
I was aware he raced for safety from a danger yawning near.

Suddenly the silence lifted at the sound of the alarm.
I was hanging to my pillow; it was not my lover’s arm.

The sunlight was streaming through the window and the door,
I welcomed it with ardor I had never known before.

Lying there to ponder on the meaning of the dream
I thought of Munch’s painting,  he’d entitled as “The Scream’’.

I knew exactly why my love had run as though my life to save.
I had been given a brief preview of dark silence of my grave.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 25, 2011 at 7:33 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in Matt's contest. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 6:50 AM
Congrats Joyce on your big win in Finish the Dream contest my friend.. super cool luv..
Onclaud Avatar
February 24, 2011 at 12:35 AM
a scary yet beautiful work, joyce.. CONGRATS for the big win..:) huggs, nette
Pettit Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 10:16 PM
Great descriptive set of rhyming couplets, Joyce. Congratulations on winning in Matt's contest with them.
Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 10:08 PM
Joyce, that last couplet to give one shivers! Way to go in this contest. I think you are one of the few who rhymed it! A big congratulations to you. Luv, andrea
Mannan Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 7:50 PM
I loved this Joyce. The end is superb. many congratulations for this win.
La France Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 6:03 PM
Congratulations on your win~~
Freeman Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 4:51 PM
A big congratulations Joyce on your worthy poem's top three honor. Agape, Moses
George   Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 3:59 PM
Simply SENSATIONAL!!!!! Joyce. Many congrats on your well-deserved BIG WIN. Lainie.
Guzzi Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 1:05 PM
Congrad's on your write! Light & Love
Mehta Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 11:59 AM
Congratulations onnth third place win in the contest of John, Joyce
Haick Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 10:11 AM
Congratulations on your great 3rd Place win in the contest, Joyce! Love your story! Love, Annalise
Caliri Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 9:21 AM
Congrats on your 3rd place win in my contest!!! A lot of submission went narrative style on their pieces...this couplet stuck out as a winner!
Brown Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 6:05 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us Joyce. I enjoyed reading it today. May you have a wonderful weekend and always find inspiration to continue your writing. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 1:38 AM
great sense of foreboding, joyce... riveting as a dark dream punctuated with sensory images! much winning luck in the contest!:) hugggs, nette
Kendrick Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 4:22 PM
Very captivating work..Got my attention and held it..Good luck in the contest if for a contest..Thanks for letting me know that I placed in the contest...Sara
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January 20, 2011 at 2:35 PM
This poem is totally gripping, Joyce. Your comparison of this dream to "The Scream" is right on target. And then when I got to the last line I had chills! I know there's a new contest up for this, but I haven't even looked at it. Still, I felt such suspense reading your words. Soup mail in a second, dear. Love, Carolyn
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