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330 The diary of a forest girl. ideas | forest girl, anime art girl, cute art

The Forest Whispered

The forest whispered softly to the girl, come it sighed and twining vines murmured; and tangled wildflowers muttered in hushed tones. Along a labyrinth path she floated as ferns caressed, the ancient trees a canopy of protection like a temple; and birds uttered a sadness as she lay deep in the green. _____________________ July 28, 2021 Poetry/Imagism/The Forest Whispered Copyright Protected, ID 07-1376-101-28 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Bite Size Poem No 15 sponsor, Line Gauthier, Judged 08/01/2021 Honorable Mention

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/3/2021 2:29:00 PM

So lovely and very pensive Constance. There is a part of the world that does whisper to us! I like that thought very much. Congratulatios on your win!

Constance La France
Date: 8/4/2021 3:42:00 PM

Sam, thanks for the compliment, comment and congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance

Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 8/3/2021 12:02:00 AM

Coming back to congratulate, dear poet. I knew it when I read it first.

Constance La France
Date: 8/3/2021 7:05:00 AM

Aniruddha, thank for the congratulations, appreciate ~ love and serenity _Constance

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/1/2021 6:38:00 AM

Beautiful Bite. Congratulations on your win!

Constance La France
Date: 8/1/2021 8:42:00 AM

Christuraj, thank you for the compliment and congratulations ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 7/31/2021 6:51:00 PM

Love it! Awesome write. God bless you always. Love, Gina

Constance La France
Date: 8/1/2021 8:42:00 AM

Gina, thanks for the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/31/2021 5:14:00 PM

Your poem brings a serene feeling...with a flowing verse. Love and hugs ~ Mala

Constance La France
Date: 8/1/2021 8:43:00 AM

Mala, thank you for the nice comment ~love and serenity _Constance

Aniruddha Pathak

Date: 7/29/2021 6:07:00 AM

The picture beckons you to read, and then you feel, a rewarding reading, lovely imagery, dear poet

Constance La France
Date: 7/29/2021 7:07:00 AM

Aniruddha, thank you for visiting my poem and for the comment and compliment ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/29/2021 1:59:00 AM

Great imagery, Constance, love the picture you have chosen too:)

Constance La France
Date: 7/29/2021 7:07:00 AM

Jo, thank you so much for the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance

Eve Roper

Date: 7/28/2021 8:23:00 PM

Beautiful feeling of the verse with great flow, Constance. Good luck in the contest.

Constance La France
Date: 7/29/2021 7:08:00 AM

Eve, thank you very much for the compliment and encouragement ~ love and serenity _Constance

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/28/2021 6:57:00 PM

Such lovely, peaceful imagery, Contance! Why were the birds sad . . . ? Janice

Constance La France
Date: 7/29/2021 7:11:00 AM

Janice, thank you for the compliment, perhaps the girl is sleeping in the green or perhaps she has died ~love and serenity _Constance

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/28/2021 2:41:00 PM

Beautifully written Constance :)

Constance La France
Date: 7/29/2021 7:12:00 AM

Heidi, thank you so much for the compliment ~ love and serenity _Constance