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The Flying Dutchman

The Flying Dutchman Looms out of the misty night, Mast and sails glowing, Surreal, such an eerie sight, She clearly crosses our bows. And then the ship disappears. The look out who first saw her Falls from the crow’s nest and dies; And we are all doomed. Jack Horne for Russell’s Mesh of Forms contest (Tanka and Dodoitsu)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/10/2012 8:36:00 PM
This is nice,, Congrats Jack on your wonderful win in Russell's contest!! love, gautami
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Date: 4/10/2012 2:20:00 PM
Jack, Congrats on your win with this dramatic write! Love, Kim
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Date: 4/10/2012 12:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win in Russell's "A Mesh Of Forms" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/10/2012 12:38:00 AM
Congratulations Jack!! big huggsss,love deb
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Date: 4/9/2012 8:13:00 PM
Congratulations of your win.
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Date: 4/9/2012 6:36:00 PM
Oh I am glad that you escaped your doom and lived to win first place. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/9/2012 6:29:00 PM
Congrad's on your win Light & love
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Date: 4/9/2012 5:34:00 PM
Nice combination of forms,Jack.Congratulations on your well deserved win......
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Date: 4/9/2012 5:32:00 PM
Congrats on your wonderful win, Jack! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 4/9/2012 1:51:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/9/2012 8:38:00 AM
congrats Jack on a grand first place win for this mesh of forms so wonderfully written luv..
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Date: 3/24/2012 1:16:00 PM
Having writtten of this ship myself, I can appreciate all the detail -- misty nights, glowing sails, eerie sights. Very cool, Jack. This would be a great one for the book! Love and best wishes in Russell's contest, Carolyn
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Date: 3/18/2012 8:16:00 PM
wow Jack .. excellent write luv.. I remember a movie like this too years back.. my hubby likes those oldies but goodies and urges me to watch them with him.. good luck in contest luv..
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Date: 3/18/2012 1:28:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one today..Great one for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Sara
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Date: 3/18/2012 1:12:00 PM
I never knew what the flying Dutchman was but the mystery is solved. Just a great entry for the contest; all the best.
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Date: 3/17/2012 7:39:00 PM
Awsome job...Jack! 'I could see her plainly I could'...Good luck in the contest!! Huggsss~Deb~
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Date: 3/17/2012 5:31:00 PM
wow, this is like some kind of legend? I love that chilling ending. HOpe it does well with Russell.
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