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Six legs, a pair of wings, a million eyes, an insect malign. See, there it rests upon my naked knee, its proboscis pumping, sucking up my precious blood, and spreading a thousand micro-organisms that feed upon our fair and sunny isle. How I loathe and detest your very sight. There you are, flying around, hovering landing, tickling, teasing. A slap, but craftily you fly away. Once such a slap had found its mark, and Blake saw life's uselessness without the reassuring force of worthwhile thought. A brush and your ancestor died. Oh, would that fate befall you too, that you would die, so I'll find peace... and calm. Note: The reference to Blake is another poem by the same name, naturally much better than mine, written by William Blake, English poet and published in 1794 in a book entitled "Songs of Experience".

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Date: 2/24/2022 4:05:00 AM
These flies are so crafty that they sense our move and before we get time to slap at them, they fly away ! A very natural response is beautifully illustrated!
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Date: 10/4/2021 2:30:00 AM
As always this is so well done that I could see the little nuisance buzzing about. The pic is perfect. Good stuff. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/28/2021 10:58:00 AM
- I can do without six legs ... but wings would be nice - A great poem, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/26/2021 1:22:00 PM
The fly an unwanted bug... can stay away from my place
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Date: 9/26/2021 10:14:00 AM
Flying fly are a nuisance, no one wants them hanging about, especially when they land on one’s knee or find their way into a cup of tea.. An excellent write Victor… Belle
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Date: 9/24/2021 7:56:00 AM
An unusual subject for a poetic write but well done Victor...Delice
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Date: 9/23/2021 9:55:00 PM
Hi Victor, You've penned a well-written write. I haven't heard of Blake nor the poem that he wrote about a fly. Now I want to look it up- Alexis
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Date: 9/23/2021 4:13:00 PM
oh I remember the fly poem by Blake. well, not exactly but I know to what you refer. How cool. I like the reference to Blake!
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Date: 9/23/2021 1:03:00 PM
Ohhh I don't like that fly, but your poem was brilliant Victor... With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 9/23/2021 9:03:00 AM
I love how you framed this one, Victor, never read Blake's poem before, maybe will read it...
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Date: 9/22/2021 11:27:00 AM
I enjoyed both yours and Blake's version of The Fly. They both contain riveting thoughts on life and death. Hugs.
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Date: 9/22/2021 11:11:00 AM
Well done!
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Date: 9/22/2021 6:32:00 AM
I see its dynamic movements in your expressive write, Victor. Indeed a nuisance--everywhere, all the time. Excellent illustration, as always.
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Date: 9/22/2021 5:25:00 AM
I love your writing, and you're right about the bloodsuckers. I really enjoyed your poems, and the structure was excellent as well—a beautifully crafted piece of writing.
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Date: 9/22/2021 4:33:00 AM
Yes!!! They are the blood sucking monsters... Loved your poetry and also loved the structure... Beautiful write...
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Date: 9/22/2021 2:45:00 AM
It’s his blood or yours. Blake would approve and say, “Skeeter, skeeter, not tonight!”
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Date: 9/22/2021 2:17:00 AM
Go ahead, swat it without guilt!
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Date: 9/22/2021 1:51:00 AM
They're so annoying Victor, always have a swat handy. Tom
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