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The Fluffed Up Pillow

I fluffed up the pillow on her side of the bed; turned on the heated blanket to make her side hot instead. Placed a glass of water on her bedside stand; made sure there was that lotion she liked to rub on her dry hands. I turned down the blanket so she could just slide in; and to make it all just perfect, fluffed up her pillow once again. I smoothed out the sheet so she wouldn’t have to lie on a wrinkle; and a little spray of lavender, in the air I did sprinkle. And just at that moment when I was ready to turn off the light, I fluffed up her pillow once more to ensure I got it right. And then I fell asleep after dropping a few more tears; that fluffed up pillow of hers hasn’t been used for fifteen years.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/14/2012 8:56:00 AM
Heart wrenching ...well written. Congrats on your win : )
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Date: 2/10/2012 12:48:00 PM
Very well worded and an awesome write. Congrats in your win in Carol's contest.
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Date: 2/10/2012 12:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my "FLUFF" contest Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/10/2012 1:55:00 AM
Joe congrats on your win, did this poem give you the idea for your contest?..David
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Date: 2/10/2012 1:32:00 AM
Congratualtions Joe and yes still love it and it is still sad xx
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Date: 2/9/2012 5:39:00 PM
Congrats, Joe. Awesome write. Great job. Ralph
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Date: 2/9/2012 5:00:00 PM
congrats Joe on a fantastic win for this great entry on fluff luv..
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Date: 2/9/2012 4:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Joe , love elizabeth
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Date: 2/1/2012 6:08:00 PM
Way too sad! Mike
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Date: 2/1/2012 11:07:00 AM
you thumped me with your last stanza, joe... this is painful yet beautifully expressed... oh, wow; a sure winner!..:) huggs!
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Date: 2/1/2012 6:30:00 AM
Oh so sad Joe, love it x
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Date: 1/31/2012 10:51:00 PM
Some people adhere to a routine for years. Nice thought-provoking poem with great descriptiveness and rhyming.
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