The Final Tune, of the Tick Tock Clock

If I had just one day to live
24 hours to feel complete
Would I race across the castle of my dreams
Hunted by the echo of the tick tock clock
Dreading the moment that fateful tune came to a halt
Chasing down runaway thoughts
Frantically piecing together broken promises
All while fearing the silence, the end of the tick, tock;


Rather
I would gaze up at the steps of this sky high castle
This floating montage of my life
And lounge upon the first step,
Resigned to enjoy these fated moments
Without fear or regret,
Resigned to enjoy this melody with those I love
This farewell tune played to me by the tick tock clock.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/10/2010 11:25:00 PM
Just revisiting this one. it's so awesome.
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Date: 8/16/2010 10:58:00 AM
Many congratulations Samir on your win in Audrey's fine contest >> James
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Date: 8/16/2010 3:12:00 AM
...The sound of time ticking down to the finish...I could feel the frenzy rush in the first part of your poem, but the second was relaxing, despite 'knowing the end is near.' Congratulations on this fine poem:)
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Date: 8/15/2010 8:17:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Samir
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Date: 8/15/2010 7:23:00 PM
Congrats Samir on your winning poem in Audrey's contest just finalized tonight.. a wonderful write and win for u to enjoy this happy Sunday..with luv..
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Date: 8/15/2010 12:09:00 PM
Thanks for submitting your wonderful poem for my first sponsored contest, Samir. And congratulations on your 6th Place Win. Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 7/12/2010 10:45:00 AM
Enjoyed this poetry from you today and will read more, please check out my recent Criminals part 3 of course Fiction. Have a great day.
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Date: 7/10/2010 2:04:00 PM
here to read one more time before I exit,, enjoyed reading your poetry today,..have a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.
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Date: 7/10/2010 12:17:00 AM
Hi Samir-- what an interesting take on the challenge-- I was thinking along these lines myself and yes, I think sometimes it is more worth it to just stop and just ponder-- best of luck to you if this is for the contest :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 7/7/2010 5:20:00 AM
Dear Samir, wonderful wisdom conveyed in this amazing free verse. I find Free verse very difficut to write. You are a master with this form. Thank you for your very kind comments. Lainie
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Date: 7/6/2010 6:58:00 PM
The emotion comes through your words in a creative way in this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Keep that pen flowing. Karen
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Date: 7/6/2010 6:54:00 PM
Oh, this is very very nice. I agree with you. WHy race around like a demon? Just relax on that step looking at all that was good. I hope this does very well in the contest. One that I have not even attempted yet. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/6/2010 6:17:00 PM
That's the best way to approach the end of one life and the beginning of eternal life. No need to pace frantically -- look forward to heaven "without fear or regret." Well stated, Samir! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/6/2010 4:49:00 PM
wow,, awesome write on "if",, the last line i liked..P.D.
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Date: 7/6/2010 4:30:00 PM
Very imaginative write using great creativeness..Good luck in the contest with this winning write..Sara
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