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The Fault

Beyond, up from my house, not far away, and stretched as wide across as I can see from north to south -there ever on display - are mountains that have stood unfailingly for centuries, magnificent and stout. They rise sublime in snow-capped splendor through the winter time. In fall, bright colors sprout from land that upward sweeps till peaks meet blue. A fault line runs beneath; it's said that soon our hills will rupture! How can man combat an earthquake? None who live here are immune, for Nature does not think of things like that! How beautiful those mountains! Eerily, they possibly could be the death of me! Sept. 19, 2020

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Date: 9/20/2020 3:17:00 PM
Our earth is a dangerous place but we always hope for the best in all situations. I hope there isn't an earthquake during your lifetime. Thanks for all the visits to my page. Sara
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Date: 9/19/2020 6:18:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea a well deserved first place. luv Michael
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Date: 9/19/2020 5:33:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea! Excellent Sonnet on Nature!
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Date: 9/19/2020 5:04:00 PM
Congrats for your winning streak, my friend! Keep 'em coming!
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Date: 9/19/2020 5:00:00 PM
Beautifully woven, Andrea, even to its melancholic end, congrats on your 1st Place win my friend, Aloha! William
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Date: 9/19/2020 3:20:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea, on your 1st Place Win in Brian's contest!! A great piece on the beauty of nature's behavour!
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Date: 9/19/2020 2:00:00 PM
The mountains, so majestic and beautiful. Much like the unfathomable sea, so beautiful and yet so dangerous. Those who live near the sea face the probable hurricane or sunami which can wipe out whole towns. Those who live in or near the mountains face earthquake or other things. No one knows what life holds in store. We all go sometime and only God knows when or how we will go. Treat each moment as though it were your last. Great job here. I like it a lot. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/19/2020 1:36:00 PM
It is scary. I think Mother Nature does think and feel though -- very difficult to understand.... Let us pray.
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Date: 9/19/2020 12:01:00 PM
The excitement of the wilderness is seeing something that has hung together for thousands of years which requires a modicum of faith to cross yourself! - And only The Shadow knows what evil is lurking there . .....Aloha! Rico
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Date: 9/19/2020 11:21:00 AM
Love how you started out describing and placing everything into view. Yes, the fault lines runs up from California I think up to the coastline of Oregon and Washington close to where I use to live. I can really cause a lot of damage. Line's contest, I just wrote what ever, just to enter.. I really didn't know what to write like all the others.
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Date: 9/19/2020 7:31:00 AM
This is a nice nature poem, Andrea. Nice descriptions with a message. It's always nice to feel a sense of awe with nature.
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Date: 9/19/2020 6:46:00 AM
May or may not be the death of you but most definitely a wonder that speaks to you...Nice imagery and sensory
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Date: 9/19/2020 4:55:00 AM
Beautiful scenic place you describe, Andrea. Enjoy the mountains!
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Date: 9/19/2020 1:26:00 AM
You never know when mother nature is going to erupt. Watched a program about Pompei and the building that goes on you wouldn't believe, they say they're living on a time bomb. Tom
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Date: 9/18/2020 10:59:00 PM
More wonderful sonnetry from the QoS... great form, IP, rhythm and rhymes, all up to your usual high standards. Living in SoCal, earthquake expectation is in the DNA, as it must be for you living by the Rockies. Now that I think about it, you had a big one this year! Great writing, Andrea.
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Date: 9/18/2020 7:41:00 PM
lovely and that is an awesome ending! My daughter went to Zion National Park when I was in Fiji. She said I must go see it so plans in the making when things slow down :)
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 9/20/2020 11:15:00 AM
Hi Rico! I did see some impressive fossil digs in Wyoming driving back from Minnesota a few years ago..as to faith while crossing thin rock ledges etc...I prefer to view from a more solid spot coz my legs seem to sublimate when they stand too close to high edges lol
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 9/19/2020 11:58:00 AM
Yes, from Zion up to Wyoming are dinosaur fossil beds and spectacular formations where faith is required that it will hang together long enough for you to cross! Aloha! Rico
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 9/19/2020 7:43:00 AM
Hi John, this has been a strange year! I have a road trip from Tucson planned with a friend who lives there in November...if you know of good detours on the way back to northern Cali, let me know; my daughter says Utah is a must for rock formations :)
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John Watt
Date: 9/18/2020 11:00:00 PM
Same here, Susan! My family was planning to camp there in April 2020, the year that wasn't! Hope you get to see it!

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