The Factory Garden

This quaint haven away from Seeing Eye
         No sound of the loom now at nature’s call
         Here on this coarse park bench in deepest fall
         Gloomy clouds above threatening blue sky.

         Song of the Blackbird rings out yet so shy
         Speckled Thrush nags his mate in tuneful squall
         Lush green lawn an ocean of food to trawl
         Twisting squirming succulents soon to die.

         I now will have to end this little verse
         Clown on a motor mower not at peace
         Feathered friends scatter to a higher place
         I look to heaven now in silent curse
         Back to the weaving shed and all that grease
         Lunch break in tatters silence without trace.

© Harry J Horsman  2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/19/2022 12:57:00 PM
Simply soulful sweetness amid lifes drive Of factory pace no Doubt, well done Harry ' Enjoyed this older post of yours!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/25/2013 4:57:00 AM
very belated congratulations Harry it is now on my home page xx
Login to Reply
Date: 10/24/2012 7:58:00 AM
Belated congrats on your win in my contest, Harry! Though I put up my blog (which takes me hours) I always PLAN to revisit the pages of the winners. So glad I came here once again this morning. This reminded me so of my grandfather, by the by. He worked in a factory all his life, working with sheeted metal. He used to bring those little parafin tins and heat up his lunch then make some tea for himself. Hugs to you :)
Login to Reply
Date: 10/18/2012 11:38:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Great idea for a factory to have a garden spot for the help to enjoy...Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 10/18/2012 8:48:00 AM
WARM CONGRATS HARRY LUV ON A MARVELOUS WRITE AND WIN .. ALWAYS AMAZING MY FRIEND
Login to Reply
Date: 10/18/2012 8:09:00 AM
Wonderfully descriptive sonnet - congratulations.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/18/2012 8:09:00 AM
Wonderfully descriptive sonnet - congratulations.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/18/2012 6:54:00 AM
congrats on a great win Harry
Login to Reply
Date: 10/18/2012 6:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your 9th place win in Cyndi's contest Harry. Love, Carol XXXX
Login to Reply
Date: 7/10/2010 1:15:00 AM
I really like this piece, it seems so inclusive and mysterious as to what all you are speaking about, I love it, nice work!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/25/2010 7:16:00 AM
Congratulations Harry on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Italian Sonnet". Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2010 9:32:00 PM
Harry, I see you did precisley a traditional Italian sonnet, down to the finest detail of syllable count per line. Also, this is a very interesting and different theme you presented from the usual. I would personally rate this one as "top notch" Congratulations. Luv, Andrea
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2010 3:16:00 PM
Congratulations, Harry, on 7th place in my Italian Sonnet Contest, with this beautiful poem.. love Constance
Login to Reply
Date: 6/21/2010 1:19:00 PM
Soup mail...
Login to Reply
Date: 6/19/2010 8:36:00 AM
Interesting wrie, Harry and well written and nice imagery! thank you for commenting "The Great Oil Spill". it is horrible to learn that this spill could go on for years!!!...Have agreat Sunday!...Gert
Login to Reply
Date: 6/18/2010 1:16:00 PM
Hey harry, I really enjoyed the imagery you painted in this sonnet. Grat job! -Mike
Login to Reply
Date: 6/18/2010 2:49:00 AM
Interesting write...Hope that you got to enjoy most of your lunch break..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad