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The Factor Lies Within

Physical respect from gravity and stamina if small conspicuous identity and notice from many when tall all can still possess the ink to write and express the wink seen features yet not enough to avoid an unforeseen fall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/14/2016 8:44:00 AM
We just keep getting up for more. You have your own style and are so philosophical. It is great!!
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/16/2016 9:12:00 AM
Thank you very much Duke
Date: 2/11/2016 2:52:00 PM
Snappy and to the point - wonderful write !!! God bless you always!!
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/16/2016 9:11:00 AM
Thank you very much Susan
Date: 2/11/2016 2:16:00 PM
I'm not used to reading limericks that are more-so wise and thoughtful, rather than knee-slapping ... so this was interesting. A poet can arise from anyone, that's one of the beauties of the art. It's about the heart and mind, rather than the brawns and physical appearance. Well penned!
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/16/2016 9:11:00 AM
Thank you very much Timothy
Date: 2/11/2016 8:47:00 AM
This took some thought, but nicely expressed, Funom.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/16/2016 9:11:00 AM
Thank you very much Lin Lane

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