Eileen Manassian Poet Quatrain

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The Face of Humility

He beat upon his breast
As he fell to the ground
Mumbled words escaping
Heart's pain formed into sound

“Please…Forgive me, oh Lord
I am so full of sin
This wretched game of life
Alone…I cannot win

I’ve cheated; I’ve lusted
I’ve inflicted abuse
Dear God…I clearly see
To you…I’m of no use 

“Forgive... God…oh, forgive…”
His beard soaked up his tears
As gut wrenching sob
Gave voice to all his fears

The “righteous” man just watched
His pride filling the place
“I thank God, heaven’s light
Is shining on MY face.

Lord, you know my good deeds
I help the poor in need
I gladly give my tithe
For Lord, I have no greed

Oh Lord, I’m not like him
That poor man on his knees
I’m glad I can stand tall
For I live life YOU to please.”

On sinner and not “saint”
The good Lord’s blessing fell
He needed to be saved
Enter heaven and not hell

The other felt holy
Justified in his eyes
The Bible makes it clear
His "righteousness" was lies

A lesson comes to us
About the sin of pride
People who are humble
In heaven will reside

So be kind and gracious
Remember your true place
For the humble in heart
Will live to see God's face.

Jade Celeste

I'm going through my older writes and reading posts left by friends. :) It is like reading a journal and reliving lovely memories. This is a poem I posted a long time ago, and I'm reposting it now. I feel that I need to learn this lesson. We get hurt when our pride is touched, but who are we to be proud?  We are finite and God is infinite. We all make mistakes, and we should forgive one another. We sometimes see others sins and are blind to our own...as in this story recorded in the Bible. I'm willing to learn. Christ was humble enough to wash the feet of His disciples...even the feet of his betrayer. Who am I to do otherwise. I need forgiveness...

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Maurice Yvonne March 25, 2015 at 8:13 AM I am happy to read this gem. A great choice to repost!

Kp Nunez March 23, 2015 at 10:15 AM Such faith-filled, thoughtful write, dear Eileen. I have the pleasure of another hour to read and ponder on beautiful writes such as this one. I see an even more lovelier soul in you! I am humbled with such wise words. Thank you for sharing your contemplative thoughts...a 7 and fav, again. PS. Happy to "see" you. Sad about Demetrios, though :(

Richard Lamoureux March 23, 2015 at 10:12 AM Well worth rereading and pondering. Thanks for reposting Eileen. HugsRick.

Shane Cooper March 22, 2015 at 10:50 PM My friend, I have sent you mail re your poem. love Shane xxx Eileen Manassian March 22, 2015 at 11:18 PM My Dear....I have responded. I'm glad this poem gave you food for thought, Shane.

David Meade March 22, 2015 at 7:28 PM Yes, forgiveness that refreshes the soul and enables us to extend this to those who have hurt us . . . it's only in this humble state of love that we can be love for others. . . rich is your journal LO!. 7 Eileen Manassian March 22, 2015 at 11:54 PM Hey you....it's only when we compare ourselves to Christ that forgiveness becomes a possibility. He was the Lord of Lords, and yet...he was subjected to cruelty, pain, and injustice and yet...while on the cross he prayed to God and said..."Forgive them, for they don't know what they are doing." Them...the ones who were calling for his death. David, so good to have you here. It brings me comfort. Yes, my journal is full of friends...old and new. I read how relationships change and evolve. Sometimes...it brings sadness for those who are no longer here...sometimes...it brings joy for new friends I've met. There is always truth to be found. Hugs

Emile Pinet March 22, 2015 at 5:21 PM I felt the emotional force behind these words. Well done. Emile.

Nette Onclaud March 22, 2015 at 12:27 PM eileen, your spirit has a deep connection with the One... such a graceful work all the way..i am touched!.. huggs Eileen Manassian March 22, 2015 at 1:08 PM Thank you, Nette. Thanks for the lovely visit. God speaks to me and corrects me, Nette. I haven't been acting in a way that is pleasing to me. :( I'm human...I need forgiveness. The good thing is...unlike humans, who God forgives our sins...he wipes the slate clean and gives us a new start. He can only teach us if we are humble and willing to learn. It's a lesson He reminded me of today. Thanks for the hugs...