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The trees pace around the morning with small steps, measured, unconsciously wearing small circles above my wind-tossed hair as I warm a steel bench with the patience of prey wrapped in undergrowth. Sirens and taxis fight over a bone as I huddle around a steaming paper cup. Why must mornings announce themselves so early in the day? Likely because they know my eyes will be at half mast, numb to needling unwelcome news. Perhaps it's the closest thing to pity I'm meant to know. My coffee cooled and palms warmed, I abandon a full cup of illusions on the bench and return to the waiting area.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/15/2012 11:17:00 AM
Well written and very descriptive. Glad I read this.
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Date: 1/12/2012 5:33:00 PM
you've got writing talent.
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Darryl Davis
Date: 1/13/2012 2:01:00 AM
Thanks :-)
Date: 1/11/2012 6:42:00 AM
You've definitely captured that feeling of anticipation, nervousness, some interesting descriptions in there. Enjoyed.
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Date: 1/11/2012 12:25:00 AM
Hi Darryl and thanks for your most welcome comments... Loved somme of the descriptions in this piece but did have to re-read the opening stanza a few times to get into it properly... Hope this is helpful?
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Date: 1/8/2012 1:29:00 PM
Darryl this is a visual gem, felt like I was with you in that space. Thank you for your comment on my poem as well :) tc Wilma
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