The Ether of Time

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Souls lost in the ether of time search the corners of forever. While wishes untethered from love; drift off into oblivion. Frustration obscures love's path for souls lost in the ether of time. And yet, love's formidable force fuels hope, and they keep looking. There are no trail posts or markers mapping the route to happiness. Souls lost in the ether of time, feel perpetually lonely. Exceptional in every way; love is a euphoric feeling. And its eternal light attracts; souls lost in the ether of time.

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John Hamilton

Date: 4/27/2020 3:15:00 PM

Well done Emile enjoyed this one, has a comforting feel to it. Btw Did you know Vienna is Pixie dust now!

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/28/2020 8:42:00 AM

Thanks John, your comments are always welcome my friend...yes I knew that Vienna is Pixie Dust, she won one of my books and I had to mail it to her using her correct name, Emile.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/29/2020 12:57:00 PM

Emile, love the poetic form you chose - almost like a pantoum, one of my favorite poetic forms. And, as always, filled with rich imagery - your central phrase "souls lost in the ether of time" is filled with emotion and evokes a vivid picture. Congratulations my friend!

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/4/2020 6:37:00 PM

Thanks Sam, I appreciate your comments, stay safe my friend, Emile.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 3/28/2020 12:26:00 AM

Emile, Intricate prose in a practiced hand. Found dutiful, yet juxtaposed, to oblivion and the ether of time. -Richard

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/28/2020 7:24:00 PM

Thanks Richard, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.