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The Ether of Time

Souls lost in the ether of time
search the corners of forever.
While untethered wishes tend to
drift off into oblivion.

Frustration obscures the path of 
souls lost in the ether of time.
And yet, love's formidable force
fuels hope, so they keep looking.

There are no trail posts or markers
mapping the route to happiness.
Souls lost in the ether of time,
feel frustrated, hurt, and lonely.

An exceptional emotion,
love fuels euphoric feelings.
And its eternal presence lures
souls, lost in the ether of time.

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John Hamilton April 27, 2020 at 3:15 PM Well done Emile enjoyed this one, has a comforting feel to it. Btw Did you know Vienna is Pixie dust now! Emile Pinet April 28, 2020 at 8:42 AM Thanks John, your comments are always welcome my friend...yes I knew that Vienna is Pixie Dust, she won one of my books and I had to mail it to her using her correct name, Emile.

Sam Kauffman March 29, 2020 at 12:57 PM Emile, love the poetic form you chose - almost like a pantoum, one of my favorite poetic forms. And, as always, filled with rich imagery - your central phrase "souls lost in the ether of time" is filled with emotion and evokes a vivid picture. Congratulations my friend! Emile Pinet April 4, 2020 at 6:37 PM Thanks Sam, I appreciate your comments, stay safe my friend, Emile.

Quoth Theraven March 28, 2020 at 12:26 AM Emile, Intricate prose in a practiced hand. Found dutiful, yet juxtaposed, to oblivion and the ether of time. -Richard Emile Pinet March 28, 2020 at 7:24 PM Thanks Richard, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.