Panagiota Romios Poet Rhyme

The Enchantress

She seemed to float into the dance.
Stunning, emerald-like, on a silver cloud.
With ruby red lips, whispering velvet sounds.
We, young girls, knew we hadn’t a chance.


Our clothes were anything but magical.
Teenaged girls, were overcome by her beauty.
Boys hypnotized ,ogling her, as if it was their duty?
Her beauty, we saw was nearly celestial!


I wondered, could I ever look like her?
Where does one become a temptress,
That leaves boys so totally breathless?
The alarm clock rang, my dream was a blur.


                         I-21-2022
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I Am Anaya July 12, 2022 at 6:35 PM Pangie, your description; the enchantress a stunning apparition, leaves teen boys falling on their knees! You had me captivated! Hugs Panagiota Romios July 12, 2022 at 6:51 PM Anaya, I appreciate you going back into my stacks of poetry, instead of just…! reading the latest post for today! I am very glad you found this one! I agree, it is a captivating poem. I forgot many of them. Thank you for finding this.l. Love, Panagiota xxx

Elena Eagle June 22, 2022 at 1:04 PM A fun poem to read and enjoy. Panagiota Romios June 22, 2022 at 2:45 PM It was fun to pen, Elena Thanks! Panagiota xx

Joseph P. DiMino June 22, 2022 at 11:10 AM Very nicely told, Pangie. Truly enchanting, such fine imagery of dance and the beauty of the human form in motion. (On a lighter note, I knew a woman who confided to me, this is exactly what motivated her to become an anesthesiologist, the thought of leaving some men breathless:) I particularly like, "She seemed to float into the dance. Stunning, emerald-like, on a silver cloud. With ruby red lips, whispering velvet sounds." Enchanting read! Thank you. Panagiota Romios June 23, 2022 at 4:16 AM Hi Joe, Catching up on missed comments. Again, we both liked the same line! That’s so amazing. Re..,Leaving men breathless. If a patient is breathless, as in OR, they are dead.)); An enchantress is quite different....LOL.. Hugs, Panagiota xx

Bill Baker June 22, 2022 at 7:12 AM Sweet dream, Panagiota. Nice imagery and surprise ending. I enjoyed the read my friend. Hugs, Bill Panagiota Romios June 22, 2022 at 10:05 AM Hi Bill.... Glad you enjoyed this fantasy. I usually do not write like this. It was fun to do for a change of pace! Thank you, friend in Texas! Hugs, Panagiota xx