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The Enchantress

She seemed to float into the dance. Stunning, emerald-like, on a silver cloud. With ruby red lips, whispering velvet sounds. We, young girls, knew we hadn’t a chance. Our clothes were anything but magical. Teenaged girls, were overcome by her beauty. Boys hypnotized ,ogling her, as if it was their duty? Her beauty, we saw was nearly celestial! I wondered, could I ever look like her? Where does one become a temptress, That leaves boys so totally breathless? The alarm clock rang, my dream was a blur. I-21-2022 ~1~

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I Am Anaya

Date: 7/12/2022 6:35:00 PM

Pangie, your description; the enchantress a stunning apparition, leaves teen boys falling on their knees! You had me captivated! Hugs

Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/12/2022 6:51:00 PM

Anaya, I appreciate you going back into my stacks of poetry, instead of just…! reading the latest post for today! I am very glad you found this one! I agree, it is a captivating poem. I forgot many of them. Thank you for finding this.l. Love, Panagiota xxx

Elena Eagle

Date: 6/22/2022 1:04:00 PM

A fun poem to read and enjoy.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/22/2022 2:45:00 PM

It was fun to pen, Elena Thanks! Panagiota xx

Joe Dimino

Date: 6/22/2022 11:10:00 AM

Very nicely told, Pangie. Truly enchanting, such fine imagery of dance and the beauty of the human form in motion. (On a lighter note, I knew a woman who confided to me, this is exactly what motivated her to become an anesthesiologist, the thought of leaving some men breathless:) I particularly like, "She seemed to float into the dance. Stunning, emerald-like, on a silver cloud. With ruby red lips, whispering velvet sounds." Enchanting read! Thank you.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/23/2022 4:16:00 AM

Hi Joe, Catching up on missed comments. Again, we both liked the same line! That’s so amazing. Re..,Leaving men breathless. If a patient is breathless, as in OR, they are dead.)); An enchantress is quite different....LOL.. Hugs, Panagiota xx

Bill Baker

Date: 6/22/2022 7:12:00 AM

Sweet dream, Panagiota. Nice imagery and surprise ending. I enjoyed the read my friend. Hugs, Bill

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/22/2022 10:05:00 AM

Hi Bill.... Glad you enjoyed this fantasy. I usually do not write like this. It was fun to do for a change of pace! Thank you, friend in Texas! Hugs, Panagiota xx