Get Your Premium Membership

The Elder

The look of youth has passed my eyes Come furrowed brow and withered skin Hair thin, bright eyes gone dim What will become of me now? Swaddled in warm linen Drive the chill from feeble bones Teas, hot oils and liniments These aromas fill my home The shell I wore is no more With deafened ear and eye so blind Brittle bones and muscles sore Prompting life to pass the time Pace unsteady, twisted spine These hands of mine will work no more Fatigued and spent, take to my bed My youth to find me never more All so precious to me now Things cast aside in early hours What a waste! Relive this taste A second chapter to devour Heart now lonely, cold and stalled House so silent, ever still Hear the clock~tick tock tick tock Gaze out from the windowsill No more visits, no more calls My wife long gone and buried deep Now welcome death with open arms My soul shall seek eternal sleep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/6/2017 11:25:00 PM
Fascinating. The other side of "Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night". You captured this crossroad of life well. Thanks for sharing.............peace!
Login to Reply
Rodd Avatar
Gayle Rodd
Date: 10/6/2017 11:34:00 PM
Thanks for the visit Richard
Date: 3/6/2017 9:48:00 AM
Your entry is so eloquently expressed and with dignity and grace. I think we can all relate to such words and thoughts as we look on either at others or ourselves. I found this entry well executed in formatting words and presentation. Well done throughout.
Login to Reply
Rodd Avatar
Gayle Rodd
Date: 3/6/2017 10:40:00 AM
I worked in an elderly care facility and the sense of the inevitable seemed to permeated the room at times. I appreciate your kind words :)
Date: 3/6/2017 9:39:00 AM
Oh, so sad, and so close to home. You dared to write the truth about some elders.
Login to Reply
Rodd Avatar
Gayle Rodd
Date: 3/6/2017 10:41:00 AM
Thank you for your input and I agree, it is the painful truth for some.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things