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The Eagle Is Flying High

New York's changed skyline once created a vacuum, regained spirit now departed souls looking down the eagle is flying high ======================== Placement:3rd;(September 2011) Contest:Remembering 9/11 Sponsor:Carolyn Devonshire

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Date: 12/28/2011 7:11:00 PM
I chanced upon one I never congratulated yet! It was a great job. I forgot your son's first name and when I type in Karmaker it is not showing me his poems. I don't think you wrote his name in my soupmail. Remind me of it.
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Date: 9/15/2011 7:46:00 PM
Very creative winning work..Enjoyed..Sara
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Date: 9/15/2011 6:00:00 PM
Hi Kash, First entry I've read that refers to the changed skyline. NIce images here. Hope IS now restored. The last 2 lines are fantastic! Congrats on your creative write.(Finals are over and now I can catch up on some reading here.) Gwendolen
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Date: 9/15/2011 5:32:00 PM
Congrats my friend on a wonderful win.. always Michael
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Date: 9/15/2011 3:55:00 PM
Many congratulations to you, Kash : )
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Date: 9/15/2011 12:57:00 PM
wonderful symbolism with the eagle. congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/15/2011 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win kashinath. Well written
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Date: 9/15/2011 4:11:00 AM
My favorite line "the eagle is flying high". Congratulations on your 3rd Place win my friend. CR
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Date: 9/15/2011 12:18:00 AM
Well done, congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 9/15/2011 12:12:00 AM
woohoo, kashi.. fly high! sunniest congrats on your special win :) huggs
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Date: 9/14/2011 8:38:00 PM
Your poem expresses the resilience of the people in the light of tragedy. Congratulations to you for the win. Best, iolanda
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Date: 9/14/2011 8:31:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kashinath! Kim
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Date: 9/14/2011 8:15:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Carolyn, Kashinath
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Date: 9/14/2011 4:02:00 PM
Congrats Kash on your wonderful win.. my friend..luv..
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Date: 9/14/2011 3:13:00 PM
Very true Kashinath. Lovely entry. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/14/2011 3:04:00 PM
congrad's on your win..oh how I wish it was the dove...light & love
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Date: 9/14/2011 2:53:00 PM
Kash, congrats on your win, liked this first time around..David
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Date: 9/14/2011 2:52:00 PM
Souls actually in a better position Kashinath. Congratulations on your worthy top three, Karmaker. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/14/2011 2:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/14/2011 1:51:00 PM
Kash, I love the sense of hope that fills your poem, especially the image of the souls looking down to see the eagle flying high with renewed spirit. Congratulations on taking third place in the contest. There were many great entries, so take pride in your achievement. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/12/2011 12:13:00 AM
Yes, a proud bird with a tenacious spirit. Your poem should be well received as it is excellent!
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Date: 9/11/2011 1:49:00 PM
wowsie, kashi... a wonder of a poem... fly high with winning steaks! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 9/11/2011 6:41:00 AM
nicely penned, Kash good luck..David
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Date: 9/10/2011 10:32:00 PM
I really like this, Kash. Maybe I will do one myself now after all. WEll, time to get off here I think. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/10/2011 9:49:00 PM
For Osama Bin Ladin the eagle swooped down, then flew up again.
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