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The Dying of the Poet’s Dream

I have this fear that beyond my years Every word I’ve said or written will be gone, Like dust in the wind or seas where rivers end These thoughts of mine will vanish with the dawn. No money or fame do I proclaim Nor legacies of great things I have done, No battle scars or discovered stars Or a trace of any race I’ve lost or won. Like most of those whose time now holds Their words and thoughts erased, Confetti like into the skies I fear that wordless fate. The dying of the poet’s dream Of living beyond oblivion, For someone to read these words indeed Would save this soul from carrion. Only time will tell if letters spell The end of all these phrases, Mere scribbles now that may somehow Be read on future pages. © Terrell Martin, 01/05/2025

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Date: 1/14/2025 11:14:00 AM
Hello Terrell, Well your first poem that I have read really strikes a deep chord. I found it to be raw, vulnerable, and beautifully introspective. Congratulations on POTD! Your words speak beyond the page, ensuring the poet’s dream lives on. Such a timeless gift! Winter Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Date: 1/8/2025 4:26:00 AM
Terrel, Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 1/8/2025 5:24:00 AM
Thank you, Kim. Very kind of you to read, respond and say so.
Date: 1/7/2025 7:55:00 PM
I wonder if all my words will end up in the trash. A dying poet would hope not. Time will tell, but I may never know.
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Date: 1/8/2025 5:27:00 AM
Few if any of us will end up as a household name in poetry but it gives meaning, purpose and a sense of the better angels in all of us. Thanks again, Terrell
Date: 1/7/2025 7:35:00 PM
Words fall gently from the sky like ' confetti. ' Such a beautiful image to behold, indeed. I'm seeing your thoughts touching the hearts of many. Keep scribbling, my dear friend. Your words are felt in the whisper of the wind. Congratulations Terrell, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 1/8/2025 5:45:00 AM
Hi Brandy, I thought I was the only who thought the confetti line captured the essence of the poem. You've managed to jump inside my heart and head with that one observation alone. Thank you does not come near enough to expressing my appreciation. Write on, Terrell
Date: 1/7/2025 5:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your honour of POTD - we are fortunate to read such a thought-provoking poem. What you have expressed is, I assume, are thoughts of all the poets and writers - we write because we want to write, but not sure if these words will be read by future generations when we are gone! For me, I just feel a wonderful sense of accomplishment after I am able to pen a few lines from my heart! Warm wishes, Dear Poet!
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Date: 1/8/2025 6:03:00 AM
Malabika, I completely agree with you. I think our deepest motivation comes from within in order to please ourselves and our sense of orderliness and wonder of life and the universe we find ourselves a part of. Any legacy we may leave, I believe, is secondary to our own sense of beauty and accomplishment. Write on, Terrell
Date: 1/7/2025 3:15:00 PM
Whoohoo!! so pleased to see you and your incredible poem as POTD Terrell! Thought provoking write…as l actually haven’t pondered that thought as of yet! You write your deep thoughts from your heart and you do it exceptionally well my friend! Congratulations….Debx
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Date: 1/7/2025 3:35:00 PM
Hello to one of my nearest and dearest poets, next to myself of course! (LOL)!!! I am so honored and proud as a peacock to have your thoughts on this most unexpected announcement of being selected for "POTD." I have long admired your own poetry from afar and will continue for as long as I am able. See you soon and "Write on," Terrell
Date: 1/7/2025 1:58:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD. I do love your poem. It describes the credit that all poets desire for their hard work. On of my worst fears is that my poem will survive with a wannabee's name attached. Thank you for a valuable look into the future. May we all be remembered.
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Date: 1/7/2025 3:40:00 PM
Hello Hilda, thank you for your concern about your poetry being plagiarized, something I had not seriously considered until now. That would be a shame and a travesty but one we cannot control once we're gone. But until then, thank you for your reading & responding. And I look forward to reading some of your poetry as well. All the best, Terrell
Date: 1/7/2025 1:25:00 PM
Terrell, these are the thoughts of all poets, and mine, one can self published and your words sit on a shelf collecting dust, or accept this fate of a poet and just write, well done, and congratulations on receiving a deservings POEM OF THE DAY honor
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Date: 1/7/2025 3:43:00 PM
Hi Constance, thank you for sharing your thoughts on publishing which I have recently been considering. But I've been wondering about the "Return on investment" and you certainly have a valid point to consider. Thanks again for reading & responding and I owe you a visit in the very near future. All the best, Terrell
Date: 1/7/2025 10:41:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Our words will live on and on. Hooray for the writers. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away..........................
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Date: 1/7/2025 11:09:00 AM
Thank you for reading and responding with such a high-minded compliment, Paula. It's means the world to me. Can't wait to visit you as soon as possible. Until then, all the best, Terrell
Date: 1/7/2025 10:29:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD :)
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Date: 1/7/2025 10:33:00 AM
Thanks for reading and responding. I had no idea it would make POTD. Cheers to you and yours. /// Terrell
Date: 1/7/2025 10:16:00 AM
Love the ending, Terrell, and all the rest as well. Thank goodness for the internet and sites such as Poetry Soup. Congrats on POTD, too.
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Date: 1/7/2025 10:37:00 AM
Thank you, Jim. Every now and then we poets get unexpectedly, "In the zone," and this was one of those rare times. Thanks for reading & responding. All the best / Terrell
Date: 1/7/2025 8:58:00 AM
Dear Mr. Martin: i am very impacted by your line "...seas where rivers end...". I think that line is uniquely yours. Congratulations on your POTD. Best -Ken
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Date: 1/7/2025 3:16:00 PM
What a beautiful comment Ken! Debx
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Date: 1/7/2025 10:46:00 AM
Wow, thanks a million Ken! Your thoughts mean the world to me and I look forward to reading some of your work as well. Until then, all the best, Terrell
Date: 1/7/2025 8:33:00 AM
Nice rhymes Terrell, unforced. More important is the message. Most of us will indeed be forgotten, save a few fans who occasionally peruse our catalog. It is what it is. Enjoy your special day
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Date: 1/7/2025 10:49:00 AM
Hi Tom. Thanks for reading and responding, esp. "It is what it is." Looking forward to reading some of your work as well and will be visit soon enough. Until then, Cheers, Terrell
Date: 1/7/2025 8:20:00 AM
if, as with the butterfly wings, each poem has its unseen, and unfelt, affect then the "words" of the poem will send out ripples that will imperceptibly touch distant shores. Nice write Terrell
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Date: 1/7/2025 10:53:00 AM
Hi John, your "butterfly wings" analysis is by far more poetic and perhaps more truthful than anything I've written here or elsewhere. In any case, thank you for reading and responding as I look forward to reading your work ASAP. Until then, thanks again & all the best, Terrell
Date: 1/7/2025 4:44:00 AM
For the poems that resonate in other’s soul it’s a hope to think it lives within like an echo. Great poem that is thought provoking yet melodic. Congratulations on potd!
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Date: 1/7/2025 10:58:00 AM
Hi Karen, I sincerely love and appreciate your thought: "it’s a hope to think it lives within like an echo." That one line has more poetry wrapped inside than many of the poems I've ever read or written. Thanks for the blessing! All the best, Terrell
Date: 1/7/2025 4:42:00 AM
Ego within us seeks recognition … Erase it! Enjoyed your musings, Terrell, a beautifully penned poem indeed, warmest congratulations on POTD
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Date: 1/7/2025 11:07:00 AM
Hello Seeker. What a pleasure to hear from a familiar poet's "voice" once again and I couldn't agree with you more in terms of erasing the ego. But it's a two-edge sword however, meaning that without a little ego we might not have the capacity to connect & share our thoughts with one another. I'm blessed to do so with the likes of you and others here in PSoup. Terrell
Date: 1/7/2025 4:12:00 AM
It’s to be hoped our poetry lives on after we are gone. Congratulations Terrell on receiving the honour for poem of the day… Beryl
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Date: 1/7/2025 11:13:00 AM
Hello Beryl and thank you for reading and responding to a poem I never expected to be selected as POTD. This came as quite a surprise but so glad it managed to touch yours and other PSoup hearts & minds. Thanks again and hope to visit you as well. Cheers, Terell
Date: 1/7/2025 3:31:00 AM
Terrell, our words and poems will live on for those who want to read them. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 1/7/2025 11:18:00 AM
Thank you for reading & responding, Tania. I completely agree with your assessment which you were kind enough to provide. I'm looking forward to reading some of your own work and getting to know you better as soon as possible. Until then, thanks again, Terrell
Date: 1/7/2025 1:25:00 AM
- As you write ... only time will tell ... congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
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Date: 1/7/2025 11:20:00 AM
Ahhh...thank you Ann! I appreciate your thoughts more than you know. I owe you a visit as soon as possible and promise to do so. Until then, thanks again, Terrell
Date: 1/7/2025 12:35:00 AM
I'm sure many of us think the same Terrell but I'm hopeful they'll live on somewhere. Congratulations to you on this thought provoking verse being honoured with POTD. Tom
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Date: 1/7/2025 11:25:00 AM
Hello Tom. Thank you for weighing in and I appreciate your thoughts more than you know. I'll do my best to stop by and get to know you better as soon as possible. In the meantime, Write on, Terrell
Date: 1/6/2025 8:51:00 PM
I think many of us hate thinking about this. But I have already faced it. When not even half my family reads my poetry, why would I expect strangers to? Anyway, I think we poets come to websites like this one so that we can feel the love of a community that appreciates what we do. And it's wonderful to find the special poets we relate to. A fave for this one.
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Date: 1/7/2025 11:32:00 AM
Andrea, I can honestly say that I don't know if I would still be here in PSoup were it not for the likes of you. You have been a steadfast reader of my poetry over the past few years and a major reason I keep doing what I do. You are very much part of the motivation and inspiration for this particular poem and "Thank you" misses the mark by many miles. Write on, Terrell
Date: 1/6/2025 8:09:00 PM
The concern of anyone and everyone who hopes for a 'legacy.' ~ Great Expectations
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Date: 1/7/2025 1:06:00 PM
OK, Terrell. "Here I am again." ... Congrats on POTD for a poem about poetry! :) Gershon
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Date: 1/7/2025 11:37:00 AM
Hello Gershon. It's quite a pleasure to "see you" again here in PSoup due to no fault of your own. I haven't done a very good job of keeping up with the neighbors here in PSoup and I hope to rectify that during this new year. In any case, I truly appreciate your thoughts and look forward to "Seeing" you again, ASAP. Until then, Write on, Terrell
Date: 1/6/2025 4:46:00 PM
Your words ring with so much truth. And this is why I always right my poems on paper and hope my family will save them once I'm gone. I enjoyed reading.
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Date: 1/7/2025 11:43:00 AM
Hello Alesia and thanks for reading and responding, especially with such a wonderful idea of leaving a legacy on paper for others to read when we're gone. I've not done a very good job of doing this myself but intend to do so now, thanks to your recommendation. I'm also looking forward to reading some of your own poetry in the very near future. Until then, God bless & all the best, Terell

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