The Ducklings I Love To Feed

THE DUCKLINGS' POINT OF VIEW The little child looked at us and smiled, This job in the sun would be much fun, We splashed sprightly, he sat quietly, Race had begun for the crumbs of a bun; With our webbed feet, we swam towards the treat, The little child looked at us and smiled, He was a dwarf in the big, wide wharf So gentle and mild, though we grew wild; We quacked and fought for the food we sought, From the quay, tossing the crumbs our way, The little child looked at us and smiled, "Don't fight, I pray", we gladly heard him say, "I have for each a piece, so be at ease", In we all piled to get near the child, The crumbs he cast, we ate very fast, The little child looked at us and smiled. ***************** THE BOY'S POINT OF VIEW I'm happy to feed these ducklings indeed, How hungry they look in this clear, cool nook, That one so small seems hungrier than all, I'm glad I took this bun from the cook; Let me sit down and enjoy their sound, I'm happy to feed these ducklings indeed, With my toes in the lake, I see the drakes Trying to lead the young ones who don't heed; Here they all have come, quacking for their crumbs Okay, here we go, one by one I throw, I'm happy to feed these ducklings indeed, And see them glow in the lake below; I sit here in peace, feeling the breeze, As they all proceed to fulfil their need, Feeding God's little pets, what joy I get! I'm happy to feed these ducklings indeed. 05/05/16
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Hamilton Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 6:34 AM
Just wonderful writing Jo, 34/40 on my score, congrats on a great second place win!
Daniel Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 7:56 AM
Thank you, John:) much honoured:) all glory be to God alone:)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 1, 2017 at 2:41 AM
Both poems are delightful as each presets what the two unite! Excellent my friend, Jo! A seven for each!
Onclaud Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 12:56 PM
how adorable, jo... a child's purity enchants!..love this.. huggs
Herlihy Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 8:44 AM
Utterly charming, a simple event by the lake made profound. I love the two points of view approach that you took. Well done. JH
Gupta Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 8:34 AM
I would have missed a graphic beauty had I not read this superb poetry of highly positive and creative emotions collected in the two vases ... Great, Jo ...
Kannan Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 8:32 AM
This is really so cute and beautiful Jo. it... Thanks for sharing... A big 7 for this lovely piece...
Andresen Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 8:23 AM
- A wonderful poem, Jo - A pleasure to read - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wolf Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 8:23 AM
What a lovely pair of poems you have created, Jo! I collect duck feathers from my local lake, they are beautiful creatures!
Allison Avatar
January 31, 2017 at 8:18 AM
Absolutely charming poem Jo I remember writing for the contest too:-) So glad you re posted the poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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