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The Driver's Seat

She drives a fancy newer Mercedes It floats along like a summer breeze She likes to make fun of my Civic Honda To tell the truth, she's rather fond-a The fellow who sits in the driver's seat Of either car, and that's pretty neat!
Written June 2, 2022

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Date: 6/6/2022 12:07:00 AM
love "fond-a" for sure!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/6/2022 8:07:00 AM
Makes for a lovely rhyme!
Date: 6/4/2022 9:17:00 AM
Hi Milton, this poem is so cute, you are definitely her dude. Hugs blessings, Jennifer.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/4/2022 1:22:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jennifer.
Date: 6/3/2022 10:03:00 AM
Cars? Since my retirement, I'm gone with the Schwinn. Happy motoring Milt. I enjoyed your jaunty light verse!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/3/2022 11:13:00 AM
I wish it were such that I could go to a Schwinn, Robert. I'm afraid I probably would make it a block. Thanks so much for your read and your thoughtful comment.
Date: 6/2/2022 8:14:00 PM
this is SO cute. Love this kind of little poem.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/3/2022 8:53:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea.
Date: 6/2/2022 8:13:00 PM
I keep reading and re-reading your witty write here, Milt. And I'm wondering: Does the 'she' consider herself a 'he?' ~ Corn Fused
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/3/2022 8:53:00 AM
I don't know where that came from, gw. No, she's very much a she.
Date: 6/2/2022 2:25:00 PM
They both do the same job getting you from a to b, If she wants to spend money on that gas guzzling beast then good luck to her lol Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/2/2022 4:56:00 PM
That's how I feel exactly, Tom. I'm very happy with my little Honda Civic.
Date: 6/2/2022 1:30:00 PM
She sounds dateable! Wink! A sense of humor, a nice car, very cute write.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/2/2022 1:46:00 PM
Thanks, Anaya. Actually, she's my next door neighbor, and she already has a boyfriend. Besides, she's kind of a snark. We don't fight, but I wouldn't call her a friend. He and I get along okay.
Date: 6/2/2022 12:23:00 PM
it sure is, milton! i enjoyed this...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/2/2022 12:37:00 PM
I love writing light verse sometimes. Seems to give my brain a rest.
Date: 6/2/2022 12:22:00 PM
lol, light as madam's car on the road...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/2/2022 12:37:00 PM
Indeed!

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