The Drive Home

Weary minds, and tired bones
In the wee night hours,  as the radio drones on...
When all the world seems fast asleep
Satisfaction looms .... for at last, we are almost home...

Our car appears, to drive itself
As if it knows the way by heart
And soon we've reached the edge of town 

I noticed there, among the trees
One lonesome house that sheds a light
It sits beside the empty highway
This lonely stretch, I've seen before
But never has it looked so glum as now

In the great dark night,
In the blackest part of the winter's hour
   that comes before the dawn:

One yellow glow upstairs: 
                 one in the kitchen below

What takes them from their sleep?
And pondering do my worries... creep...

We do not know whether a woman's hands
Soothes a sickly brow, or comforts a child
But I say a prayer, and though I will never know,
If a life is moved easier for my words...or her worries
Grow lighter by my talk with God...
      I believe it will be so.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
June 18, 2010 at 10:38 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strands contest "Poem Of Faith" Carrie. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 7:55 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Carrie.Rgds Brian
Arteaga Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 2:24 PM
Very nice imagery, the write of lights and the feeling of the glows, warm and wondering, congratulations!
Augustus Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 1:52 PM
Congratulations!
Loving Iii Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 1:20 PM
never doubt the prayers of the rightous. your there because they need some one who cares. john congrads
Guzzi Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 6:32 AM
Congrad's on your well deserved win! Light & Love
Strand Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 12:41 AM
Congrats on your success in Matt's contest Carrie.Rgds Brian
Laic Avatar
November 20, 2009 at 6:04 PM
Thank you, Carrie. Your poem is very sensitive and I enjoyed reading it. Love, Florentina
Sweetheart Avatar
November 20, 2009 at 2:56 PM
Congrats, Carrie, on your winning poem in the contest ... wonderful write ... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
May 14, 2009 at 7:38 PM
You have a knack for painting a picture. Vince
Shango Avatar
May 8, 2009 at 11:16 AM
I am convinced my mother's voice had miracles in it ... my pains abated when she spoke, I am convinced each woman is a cup of miracle in the world ... pity our poor faith that die sometimes without her healing hands ... I feel this write, bravo.
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May 8, 2009 at 9:36 AM
One of the few touching works I've come across so far in Soup. The human compassion cannot but shine through. It takes a truly human, compassionate heart to notice little details like that light in the darkness, much less personalize and give meanings to it. The human species still has a chance, if we all think -and feel - alike. I TRULY LOVE THIS WORK, MOVING ME SO DEEPLY. I have not capitalized any of my past Soup comments until now...and all it took is one little light. I'm envious. Fred
Winter Avatar
May 8, 2009 at 9:02 AM
Only a caring heart such as yours would even do such a thing. You always think of others. I must agree with Stacey, this is like a well captured photograph. Great shot. : ) Love, Shar xoxo
Rhinem Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 7:49 PM
Ps. Oh, and yes, I too believe that "Prayer" is the greatest gift of all to those whom doubt not and truly believe!!!!:):) ~
Rhinem Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 7:44 PM
Smile~I truly love this late nights reflection and tale of "Yours" here dear lady!!!:):)~"Hello Precious, Priceless & Beautiful Carrie Richards & All Your Loves!!!!":):)~I hope that "Your Lives" have been treating "You All" very splendidly dear!!!?:):)~And as always, "Your Heart of Tenderness" shines through within this warm and faith filled write of "Yours" here!!!!:):)~Lets view a few more of "Your Treasures"...."Beautiful Write!!!!":):) ~
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May 7, 2009 at 7:39 PM
Most certainly your prayers help those whose lights are on, Carrie. You allow the reader to join you on this incredible "drive home" from the airport in the wee hours. Only a kind soul like yours would be moved to prayer when seeing the light. Have you ever seen the movie "Bed of Roses"? A man is moved to send flowers to a woman when he sees her crying near her window late at night. Your prayer is a match for his offer of compassion. Bless you, Carrie
Hudson Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 7:21 PM
Nothing reaps greater reward than the non-verbalized gesture of kindness (prayer). Although we may not see the blessing, we ask in faith.-AA
Gorelick Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 5:03 PM
I do love this...I love to drive at night and look at homes with lights and imagine what is going on there. Good work ! BG
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 1:16 PM
Carrie, Miracles happen and mighty faith makes it so. It is wonderful that you care so much about mankind to offer prayer on the behalf of a stranger that you have never met. God bless you. And I think so, too. I love this sweet peom which expresses the pure love that we all need to practice in order to become a better humanity. Excellent write. Love Dane. (Thank you for your alway welcome and encouraging comments.)
Ginn Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 10:27 AM
Oh I just love you awful, I think the same thoughts and you never know but something calls us to prayer. The observations of a someone that actually sees.
Higgins Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 10:23 AM
Wonderful moving write my friend.
Strand Avatar
May 7, 2009 at 8:40 AM
You are truly caring inyour observation of life Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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