THE DISTANCE BETWEEN US

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I stood there wanting to find a way to reconnect to reach inside and say the words to touch her soul and make her mine She glanced my way and looked right through me as if I wasn’t there when ever so casually she tossed her sunbleached hair off her rounded shoulders And it was then I wondered if she had ever cared posted on November 4, 2023

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Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 2/12/2024 9:18:00 PM

Lovely write beautifully expressed

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/15/2024 1:01:00 PM

Thank you so much ~

Silent One

Date: 12/3/2023 12:49:00 AM

I can relate to this one... Deeply emotive

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/16/2023 8:00:00 PM

Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment ~

Mike Bayles

Date: 12/1/2023 9:26:00 AM

Very emotional and good rhyme.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/2/2023 5:11:00 PM

Thank you very much, Mike ~

Lisa Ricci

Date: 11/21/2023 6:45:00 AM

Good Morning Line. Hello. Oh I find this sad. Rest easy however because sad soft and quiet entries and words make for beautiful poetry. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent. Have a wonderful morning and day. Blessings always (smile)

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/27/2023 4:15:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely comment, Lisa ~ have a lovely day!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/8/2023 10:35:00 PM

Wonder no more, I guess, about she of the 'sunbleached-hair.' (Always went for 'unbleached,' myself). Soulful and stirring, Line. Hope all is well, gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/9/2023 4:48:00 PM

Thank you very much for dropping by and commenting, Gershon.