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The Destiny of You

You are the joy to my morning The warmth to my night The spill of my heart, The caress of my soul My fondest thought, My favorite future

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Poet Tacito

Date: 3/31/2018 6:18:00 PM

A slow dance with a present heartbeat. Uplifting & direct. The way it should be.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/30/2018 11:16:00 PM

Sweet and tender. Lovely, Laura.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/24/2018 6:55:00 AM

Delightful and sweet. A real treat, dear. Lovely

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 3/22/2018 3:13:00 PM

words that seem to pour from the heart, lovely

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/22/2018 5:40:00 PM

I appreciate the visit, Michael. Yes, straight from the heart it surely was. Thanks so much <3 ~Laura

John Gondolf

Date: 3/22/2018 11:29:00 AM

Very nice, Laura, sounds like words spoken from the heart. John

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/22/2018 5:39:00 PM

Thank you, John. Thanks for stopping by to read this one. <3~Laura

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/22/2018 8:30:00 AM

Breathtaking Laura! 'The spill of my heart, the caress of my soul' - such serenity in your passion. I love this write.. your last two lines just sparkle with purity and loving optimism.. Warmest wishes. ~Susan

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/22/2018 11:02:00 AM

Thank you Susan-I love when poetry, expression becomes effortless, but not any less meaningful. I appreciate your thoughts and your kindness. <3~Laura

Maria Williams

Date: 3/21/2018 9:21:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful Laura, such warmth to these words of yours.....Maria xx

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/21/2018 9:50:00 PM

Thanks Maria, as warm as my heart can possibly be in this point in time. <3~Laura

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/21/2018 5:54:00 AM

Sweet...I like " my favorite future" All the best Laura

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/21/2018 5:13:00 PM

I like that too(: Glad you appreciate the line as much as I. Thank you, Art. <3~Laura