The Desert

shifting sands motion of visual time.... the Desert. © Harry J Horsman 2011

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2012 11:06:00 PM

I just clicked on this one and found I had chanced on a really nice haiku!! Maybe a good one in one of Brian's contests sometime.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/31/2011 4:42:00 AM

Hi Harry, great imagery of the desert! I experienced two: the Atacama and the Sinai....Enjoyed the read this early afternoon...And thank you for your kind comments....Gert

Christine A Kysely

Date: 1/27/2011 7:00:00 PM

Very Nice Imagery!!! Not sure of the syllable count! Christine

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 1/27/2011 3:27:00 PM

Nice Haiku...Jimmy

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/27/2011 12:59:00 PM

Wonderful a place where time is sand.. the hours of ones glass shifting like the wind... have a wonderful one,..p.d.

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/27/2011 9:40:00 AM

Hello Harry, My father use to visit the desert just to get away. He loved the quiet. This poem reminds me of him there. Thank you for sharing, its lovely As Always, Shar

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/27/2011 7:41:00 AM

Harry, Thats interesting, I have a haiku about shifting sands too but don't have it posted here. I like this because it is exactly what I was writing today, or similar. I have 1,000's of haiku, it would be so much work to post them but maybe one at a time over time lol. Love this one:))

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/27/2011 7:18:00 AM

Good descriptive haiku. It makes me feel warmer just reading it.

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/26/2011 11:41:00 PM

enjoyed this shifting write Harry.