The Depth and Breadth of Quiet

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I told no one I'd seen the night— how tension breached a sunset start, how sea had swallowed all the light. I told no one the world is glass—a whale is art, this frame of sky its ancient right, it plays each game the same—by heart. The moment's pulse too wide to try resuscitation, CPR— now all that's left to gain, insight I told no one. (5)

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/24/2025 12:42:00 AM

Congratulations Jaymee on receiving the honour of poem of the day. A remarkable write it is, enjoy the accolade…Beryl

Karen Jones

Date: 6/24/2025 12:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your potd! Enjoy your day in the sun!

Saivi Kurian

Date: 6/22/2025 7:48:00 PM

Hello Jaymee, Your poem is a quiet marvel. its imagery is vivid and dreamlike, and the refrain "I told no one" lingers like a secret too heavy to speak. There's a gentle depth to its sorrow and awe that makes it truly memorable :)

Hiba Junaid

Date: 6/22/2025 2:30:00 PM

This poem is unique, beautiful and fascinating. It reads like a memory - hazy at the edges, but dreamy and soothing, almost, but not quite. It's a hard balance to master, but you have achieved it here. A very good read. Faved. Be Blessed always, Hiba :)

Jaymee Thomas
Date: 6/22/2025 2:42:00 PM

Wow, Hiba. I just went to your page, and I was blown away. You're very talented and now I feel even more flattered by your comment. Thank you so much for taking the time read my work and comment.