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The Dead Man Whom I Kissed

I am free as a bird Ready to discover this wondrous world I am dressed to the nines Seeking a knight in shining armor He will be handsome alright Defending me from life’s lows and sorrows I shall be his flower, ready to be plucked Oh my petals shall lust for his kiss The big city a delight, as I shop all night! As I gaze upon the handsome men all over I am hopeful one shall take my hand So they we might begin a lovers journey Night time jazz, clubs filled with hazy smoke Man after man after drink and nothing of substance What’s a pretty girl to do? Another night of blackness and no shining black knight So off I wander to the city park The lush smell of green filling the air There is a graveyard up over there A promenade among the dead There under the moonlit sky, is an old man His hair all white, his dress somewhat wrinkled He seems to star into nothingness Ah but his eyes are clear blue like the ocean true I am abashed yet I stare into these crystal blue eyes Something stirs from within me, yes I see as clear as day The kindness and compassion within this weathered old man I lose my breath, this is foolish for I just know somehow, I know I know I walk up to him, and kiss him on the lips as I should not This is not me, yet I know this is exactly me, I just know He looks with sadness, and says simply "I am a dead man, from long ago" I kiss him once more and say “I will return three days hence and we shall see" Three days later, like a statue he stands stoically still and almost in fear I take his hand, and whisper, life is full of miracles We have no time to lose, I see into your beauty and I see into your pain Hold me and love me, I am yours completely, in the falling rain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/20/2014 11:46:00 AM
WOW! Again this is an awesome poem. It has great imagination. I don't know if you dream all this poems at night, or they just pop up in your head. Either way they are awesome.... Lucilla
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 9:46:00 PM
Sometimes reality is stranger than fiction!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 9:45:00 PM
This one was based on a true story that I was told!
Date: 5/18/2014 5:59:00 AM
hi Arthur I love the flow and the image in this tale, and you don't often see the word 'abashed' it is almost a dead word in itself so it falls in very well with your theme, well done, excellent....David
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 9:45:00 PM
Thank yo so much David, happy to see you back here! I sincerely hope all is going well for you!
Date: 5/18/2014 12:42:00 AM
This is fantastic, love the story and the imagery :D
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 9:44:00 PM
Hi there A.E. Glad you enjoyed!!! Thanks so much
Date: 5/17/2014 6:49:00 PM
Dear Arthur, I can't tell you how taken I am with this poem. "Beauty's only skin deep," right? It has a magical quality to it and will make a wonderful entry for the Gender Bender contest. I'm sure you'll excel with this entry! Love, Carolyn
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 9:40:00 PM
Such kind words, warm my heart, thank you so much!!
Date: 5/17/2014 5:58:00 PM
Dropping by to give this another read. Yep still pretty amazing work!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 9:39:00 PM
Thanks Richard, and I still have to make the correction!!! I am a professional procrastinator!!!
Date: 5/16/2014 3:13:00 PM
An intriguing tale....nicely written
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 9:38:00 PM
More intriguing than some may think, based on a true story. Thanks Joseph!
Date: 5/16/2014 3:09:00 PM
Change star to stare and it will be perfection. Please enter this one into my gender Bender Contest. This is what I am looking for in an entry.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 9:37:00 PM
Oh Richard if only I could spell!!!! Thanks , Not here as much these days with work, trying to answer and read everyone on weekends!!! Cheers!
Date: 5/16/2014 1:44:00 AM
Nicely done, Arthur. I'll say this, the poem held my attention, and many do not. Very expressive and imagistic, my friend. Kudos...mel
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 9:35:00 PM
Thanks Mel, hope all is well with you! Cheers!
Date: 5/15/2014 11:22:00 PM
Wow!!!! Great.... Gina
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 9:34:00 PM
Wow great smile!!!! thanks!
Date: 5/13/2014 7:22:00 PM
Arthur, you amaze me more and more. I think my jaw dropped to the floor while reading this. I can't find it anymore! LOL but seriously, you're incredible!!! Consider me a rabid fan but I think that's what I am now! :o
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 9:32:00 PM
You are far to kind, please lets keep my head from growing bigger! LOL Thanks
Date: 5/13/2014 10:16:00 AM
You entice me in your powerfully expressed write, Arthur. well done. // paul
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 9:33:00 PM
Thank you kindly Paul, much appreciated!
Date: 5/13/2014 7:19:00 AM
- A deep, beautiful and very well written poem Arthur... BRAVO !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/13/2014 2:54:00 AM
Wowowowow!!!! Petals petals love that nice line.... Mmmmn but I love more the last line.... Dramatically sweet and romantic....:) all in all a beauty..:) dead man becoming alive :P wink from olive :D :P
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Date: 5/12/2014 9:19:00 PM
intriguing and alluring, you inspire me and twist me in a wicked web!
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Date: 5/12/2014 7:14:00 PM
Oh what a delicate web you've woven for me within these lines of mystery, I'm under the spell of a grand master of dark poetry who's called me eager but is so himself, the true master of the darkness. lol Thank you for the beautiful name my dear Auther, it's good to know that the queen Van Dame of sinister still has it going on. cheri Poe at your service sir cheri
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 9:30:00 PM
Sorry for late replay Cherl, much appreciated, Tonight I am answering comments and hopefully time to read some on the weekend!!!! Hope you are well.

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