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The Day Turns Back Into Night ITQ

I am now up and half asleep, quiet I must not make a peep, others are still sleeping like sheep, need to get dressed and start my jeep. Off to school it is time to go, a teacher is making me glow, looks like it is starting to snow, I need to get to work for dough. With this winter storm descending, meetings I am not attending, no my ice scraper is bending, oh please warmer days start tending. "Before the day turned into night," now turn on the living room light.

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Ann Peck

Date: 4/9/2024 12:27:00 PM

i love your poem, Paula. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/10/2024 1:56:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Great to see you back. Glad you love my write. Guess winter is gone for now. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a fun/blessed day writing away.......................... Reply

Joseph May

Date: 3/28/2024 10:10:00 AM

Congrats on your win Paula, Very nicely penned

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/28/2024 12:08:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Great to see you back. Glad you enjoyed my write again. Have a fun/blessed day writing away..........................

Speaks Volumes

Date: 3/28/2024 3:28:00 AM

Lovely poem Paula. a pleasure to read. I enjoyed it immensely.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/28/2024 12:08:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you found my write to be a lovely poem/pleasure to read/enjoyed it immensely. Have a fun/blessed day writing away..........................

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/27/2024 7:40:00 PM

Paula, a big congratulations your way for you top placement! Very well deserved!!!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/28/2024 12:01:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my write. It was fun to write. Have a fun/blessed day writing away..........................

Charles Messina

Date: 3/27/2024 10:53:00 AM

Paula, I enjoyed reading your story/write. Very nicely done...Let's hope we don't need those ice scrapers anymore...brrr. Congratulations on your 1st place win! Blessings dear friend...Hugs Charlie

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/27/2024 12:15:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my fun write. I enjoyed writing it for your wonderful contest. Thanks for the placement. Winter comes with some crazy weather. Have a fun/blessed day writing away..........................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/26/2024 10:35:00 AM

"1 Place" The Day Turns Back Into Night ITQ ~ Date Written:1/9/2024

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/12/2024 11:00:00 PM

I really liked reading this one , Paula. And it goes so well with current weather

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/13/2024 11:17:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my write. It is winter with crazy winter weather. Stay warm/safe... Have a fun/blessed day writing away..........................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/11/2024 12:00:00 PM

Whoa!! I feel for the person/s who have to get out in that kind of weather for work and then have to get out once again to get back home but at least the home fires are burning. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/11/2024 1:04:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun write. I did this snow thing/it was no fun. Have a fun/blessed day writing away..........................

Joseph May

Date: 1/11/2024 9:03:00 AM

Very nicely penned Paula, best wishes in the Contest

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/11/2024 1:02:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you found my write to be very nicely penned. Have a fun/blessed day writing away..........................

Silent One

Date: 1/10/2024 10:55:00 AM

Nice rhymes and flow to your poem.. You did this really well.. Best of luck in the contest..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/10/2024 2:17:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your best of luck. Glad you found my write to be a nice rhyme and flow. Your kind words make me happy. Have a fun/blessed day writing away..........................

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/10/2024 10:52:00 AM

the title was perfect for your poem. I enjoyed your rhyme scheme and smooth flowing lines. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/10/2024 2:10:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you enjoyed my fun write. That makes me happy... Have a fun/blessed day writing away..........................

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/10/2024 8:09:00 AM

Paula, your execution of this poem displays a remarkable fluency in the smooth flow of your rhymes and lines. Best wishes for the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/10/2024 2:08:00 PM

Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you found my write to be a smooth flow. Your kind words make me happy. I want my readers happy. I write from God to my readers. Have a fun/blessed day writing away..........................

Ink Empress

Date: 1/10/2024 12:06:00 AM

Wow you did this so well, seamless, how your rhymes and lines flow, cant even tell there are rhymes here in every stanza, impressive! I love the way you always write in such a flawless manner. Pleasure reading your work, best wishes for the contest

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/10/2024 1:56:00 PM

Thanks for your note, very kind words and for your best wishes. Glad you found my write to be a wow/seamless. It makes me very happy you find my write to be a pleasure to read. I want my readers happy. I write from God to my readers. Have a fun/blessed day writing away..........................

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/9/2024 7:56:00 PM

The Day Turns Back Into Night ITQ ~ Date Written:1/9/2024