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The Dark Poet

He sits and watches patiently Craving some emotion To drive his mind to find some words and Put his thoughts in motion So sick and tired of pretty verse Of butterflies and flowers Those lovely poets he must destroy Tear down their ivory towers His gruesome game continues For he is not alone He shifts a little closer To hear his victim moan His inspiration gathers As their life begins to ebb Now he's looking for another To tangle in his web The Dark Poet Competition entry (Honourable Mention)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/18/2010 9:17:00 AM
great spin on expressing emotions; those we try to conceal, sometimes even from ourselves. Love the web analogy. Thank you for your thoughts and comments on my poem my friend, always welcome. Peter
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Date: 5/26/2010 12:51:00 AM
Congratulations Nick, on your success in the Dark Poet Contest sponsored by, SKAT a k a Irma, with this uniquely dark poem. Subtle destruction...one mental intrusion at a time. Hum?
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Date: 5/24/2010 5:54:00 AM
Luv this one Nick... great spin on the poetry angle... u set the scene beautifully... see how missed u are? have a wonderful day.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/23/2010 7:16:00 PM
Hi Nick ..where have u been? congrats on your HM in the Dark Poet Contest... a great write and enjoy your honor..with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/21/2010 5:08:00 PM
Way to go Nick.congrats on your success in the contest. I especially like the last stanza. BG
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Date: 5/21/2010 3:00:00 PM
good one for serial killers, Nick, and congrats on your HM in this gruesome contest!! Luv, andrea
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Date: 5/21/2010 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Nick in "The Dark Poet" contest sponsored by S K A T. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/21/2010 5:06:00 AM
Very nice!! very nice!!
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Date: 5/20/2010 3:48:00 PM
I read this over and over aloud. Your words trip off the tongue and sound beautiful.
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Date: 5/20/2010 6:52:00 AM
soup mail
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Date: 5/20/2010 6:49:00 AM
You a bad mo digger- great write
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Date: 5/20/2010 5:58:00 AM
Provoking... I SO want to counter with my poem against all poems dark, dull, and disgusting; ugh... emo. Nevertheless, it had good personification and imagery and made me feel something. Check plus.
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Date: 5/20/2010 5:20:00 AM
well done...nice write
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