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''The Dancer''

There once was a girl who got off the couch, she joined a dance class cause she was no slouch; But when others went this way, well, her feet were stuck in clay; Spinning and grinning she hit the wall- OUCH! __________________ June 3, 2017 Poetry/Limerick/"The Dancer" Copyright Protected, ID 17- 906-710-0 All Rights Reserved, 2017, Constance La France Written for Limerick contest, sponsor, Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer Fourth Place Featured Poem Week of July 5 to July 11, 2020

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Date: 7/6/2020 12:05:00 AM
Spinning and grinning she hit the wall- OUCH!........beautiful limerick
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Date: 7/5/2020 3:50:00 PM
I love this, dear Heart!!! Your words are always a blessing to me. So adorable, this one!
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Date: 6/17/2017 10:10:00 AM
Hello friend. Its been a while. LORD! This is just vintage you! Excellent, Awesome and a master in this covetous craft of writing. Keep on flowing the ink of your mind. A 7 for sure.
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Date: 6/12/2017 11:06:00 AM
Sure made me smile Constance many congrats and hopefully soon you will be up and about and dancing:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/11/2017 7:58:00 PM
Hey, Constance. came to congratulate you. Also I am hoping you are ok. Thinking of you, dear. Miss you!
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Date: 6/5/2017 6:38:00 PM
GREAT rhyming with the OUCH words, Constance. I liked that cute fun ending. Thanks again for my placement. I am getting ready myself for the gym now. Gotta be there in 15 min. so I am OUTTA here!!
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Date: 6/5/2017 1:02:00 PM
Very nice poem my dear friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/3/2017 1:30:00 PM
Should she have stayed on th couch? Well time will tell. Perhaps she will try to hit the wall again and again;)
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