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The Dance of the Water Nymph

Despite the large orange flowering flame tree
That shaded my veranda, the summer heat was intense.
No amount of ice-cold beer could quench my thirst.

A stone throw away was my lovely verdant wood.
It lured me towards a more shadowy place.
Iridescent hues filtered through high branches
Of dark oak trees and stately ashes.
I trod the path, dotted with dubious luminous toadstools.

Distracted I mistook my normal path.
A large hawthorn hedge seemed to block my way,
Till I found an opening, a dreamlike scenario.
There a rivulet twisted its way among the trees
Growing fast till it became a pool in front of a dark deep cave.

Blossoms evanescence fragrance of the wood supplanted 
The scent of flowing waters adorned with lotus flowers.
Distant vibrant music echoed with euphonic refrains. 

Dancing above the hazy pool was a sight never to be forgotten.
She was beauty in perfection, a palpable poetic water sprite.
Spying me on the bank, she beckoned me to join her.
Who could resist such a soft embrace as we danced 
Above the lotus covered pool while meadowlarks
Accompanied us with their warbling tunes?

My heart was filled with radiant love,
Ethereal whispers warmed my yearning heart.
Her luscious lips suddenly brushed mine.
Her loving embrace charmed me into surreal ecstasy
Her alluring eyes sent loving messages
As somehow, I felt the pull of the upper skies,
A feeling of unforgettable emotional attainment
Riding the woolly cooling clouds.

I woke from my trancelike riddle
As I found myself back on my veranda.
I had to find her again, but the sun was setting.
I resigned myself to fate. Was all I saw unreal and imaginary?
I desperately longed for a new morn and a new encounter.

24 May 2021
Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
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George Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 3:44 AM
This is indeed so good a reverie.... ! I got trapped in that bewitchingly enchanting experience of dancing with the mermaid. The words and images used have created a dream like experience. A rightly deserved win, dear friend !
La France Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 3:14 PM
Victor, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Dreamlike - Challenge, and I like your image too, peace - Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 12:47 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your pen was working overtime on this write. Watch out for trancelike states on a veranda. Have a blessed day.................
Edmonds  Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 12:37 PM
Back with congratulations Victor, a well deserved win in Constance’s contest… Belle
Alex Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 12:06 PM
Beautiful Imagination. Congratulations!
Ball Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 6:02 PM
As always Victor this is exceptional in every way. Loved the description and imagery here. You take the reader into the dream with you. Good Stuff my friend. God Bless, JB
Rone Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 12:48 PM
A trance-like poem that had me floating. It rocked and warmed me. good luck in the contest. - Ken
Jayasankar Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 7:59 AM
Beautiful poem with great imagery using all the words chosen... Best wishes in the contest... God bless... ~ Ani
Rodrigues Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 4:19 AM
Your knowledge of the natural world along with romance and mystery serves you well, my sweet friend! ~ Kim
Edmonds  Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 3:20 AM
Wow what a magical, charmed encounter, a beautiful write Victor, and a fantastic contender for the contest… Belle
Alex Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 11:01 PM
Mythically merged. Beautiful.
Buehler Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 4:25 PM
Your masterpiece poetic telling of a dreamy romantic escape, and an otherworldly encounter, sure reads like a winner to me, Victor. Very lovely! :D
Rose  Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 3:17 PM
Ethereally transcendental :)
Riabi Dziri Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 2:49 PM
An entrancing poetry that carries the reader to a world of wonder! A bliss of a unique flair that escapes the frames of words to soar to higher levels of enchantment and discovery of both outer and inner world! The wonderful feeling though it is fleeting but the great pleasure of reading such amazing poetry is lasting! I salute your great talent and your soaring imagination, Victor! A stunning rendition worthy of an outshining placement ! My deepest regards and blessings.
Y. Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 1:19 PM
WoW! Victor, You took the chosen words and penned a well written “ dreamlike” write. Your content and imagery is very good. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Gilmour Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 1:06 PM
Enjoyed your storytelling Victor and wish you well for a win my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Daniel Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 7:04 AM
A brilliant dream and trance you experienced, Victor, and let us experience with you:) love your use of words and imagery:) simply awed:)
Roper Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 6:58 AM
You did so well in this story with great imagery and feelings. I love this imaginary type stories. Should do very well in Constance's contest. Hugs eve
Kendrick Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 6:45 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Very descriptive work. Sara
Pandit Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 5:38 AM
Charming encounter as only a gifted pen can describe. Exquisite imagery, mesmerizing details in excellence sublime. A winning poem as always, Victor.
Cunningham Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 2:42 AM
Loved your journey into the realms of fantasy, great use of the allocated words Victor. Enjoy your week. Tom
Poet Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 2:36 AM
Wonderful writing, with incredible symbolism and imagery Victor! You wrote a beautiful poem in which the emotions were quite strong and the words flow smoothly, also the use of the pre-select ones, was very appropriate, I'm confident that this writing will be an outstanding placement.
Milgate Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 2:26 AM
lovely hope she returns thank you for the imagery.
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