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The Dance

There is a sentence waiting to be spoken, a thought given to the morning to find a voice when all is still and each sound lifts above the quiet like prayer. I hear the water murmuring incantations over rocks, insects deep in throated shadows reciting their repetitive chants and inside the isolation of an ear, a pulse counting out my life in heartbeats. What can I assemble to place on the doorstep of understanding, what insight can I wrestle from these sounds before they thin and seep into an infinite silence when it seems that all of creation is dancing joyously around its rim.

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Date: 1/5/2024 5:12:00 AM
“… the doorstep of understanding” that’s such a fantastic line, Paul. Often, I’ve been tempted but afraid to walk across such a threshold. Wrestling with what I thought I might discover would be in opposition to what was behind that unopened door. You feed your readers food for thought.
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Paul Willason
Date: 1/6/2024 2:31:00 AM
Your comments are always carried by that clear mind of yours, Lin, and very much valued. Particularly grateful to learn that my words provide something to ponder...important for any poet...gives a lift to the pen.. Sincere thanks.
Date: 1/4/2024 4:22:00 PM
Your poem spoke to me, Paul, for it echoes the thoughts I occasionally have as I write poems or essays. I wrestle with them sometimes too long, and they escape. Am faving this one...have a great evening, Sara
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Paul Willason
Date: 1/6/2024 2:21:00 AM
Thankyou Sara for comments...so pleased that the poem found meaning in the experience described...always adds to the satisfaction of writing poetry when one learns that it somehow connects. Very much appreciated.

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