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The Colour of My Heart

When midnight tides impeach my chamber door And clot to rot the splint no flood can pass, By thrashing currents, shocked, I drift ashore - An endless stroke of pain where grains are glass; If day has ever been, then sun collapsed, Where darkness blindly carves relentless sight; There is no spectrum here, as time elapsed Itself renews in everlasting white. But yet I walk in search of something blurred, Aware my feet have bled the ocean red, Without the use of eyes to chase what’s heard - A promise broken when its maker fled: Though nothing new, my heart beats borrowed blue, When lies impeached were wives that said, ‘I do’. 11/29/2018 Submitted for: The Colour of My Heart Sponsored by: John Hamilton

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Date: 12/17/2018 4:52:00 PM
Just stopping back with congratulations on your great win, Phillip!
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Date: 12/17/2018 1:40:00 PM
This is one of the best winning entries that I have come across, Phillip. You make great use of personification and metaphor. ~ Congratulations on your fine win. // paul
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Date: 12/17/2018 12:16:00 PM
Here we are again...this time success. Congrats Phillip on placing in this very tough to judge premium contest. As I've mentioned, this as well as ANY of my top tens in this contest in, my opinion could win any other contest, so congrats on a great write!
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Date: 12/13/2018 4:09:00 PM
Your sonnet is awesome, Phillip. Your final couplet at the end is especially powerful and I love the lines about sun collapsing to render darkness. You have a great talent for this form. Best wishes for the holidays, Carolyn
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Date: 12/13/2018 1:55:00 PM
Great sonnet Phillip, sorry it didn't make the final cut, it may be your personal experience, but in this contest I was looking for a specific, man/nature oneness theme. This would win any other sonnet contest,(suggest you re-enter this in my next sonnet contest).
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 12/13/2018 1:58:00 PM
No apologies necessary, my friend. I always appreciate fresh prompts and a reason to write. I realized after the fact that I had misinterpreted what you were looking for, but I enjoyed the journey all the same. :)
Date: 12/11/2018 5:05:00 PM
I absolutely love the metaphors in the way you write Phillip. You have such a unique stylen ending in superb lines! I hope this entry receives a top placement my friend. Happy Holidays to you and yours! Connie : ) xxoo
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