The Color of Silence

If you could paint a picture of silence
What color would it be?

Would you use a brush to paint the fog
in shades of gray, a touch of brown 
to hush the season from all sound? 

Would eaves be dripping to the ground
while windows weep with quiet tears
Where solitude has blurred the view
in states of lonely winter-lude?

Would silence be a shade of green
A forest deep, a muted scene
No sound to scatter birds from trees
No broken branch, or swaying grass
Missteps that crackle the fallen leaves
Untouched by clatter, harsh and rude?

Would silence be as black as night
A cave too deep for shards of light
A void within a famished core
A well of dark and empty shores?

Or would silence be of many hues?
A rainbow shade of morning dew
A soft pastel of sun declining?
No bedlam, blast or blare of noise
Could break the spell, a silent voice 
As if the soul could slip away....

A hush,  immense.....so sweet and keen, 
Like ghosts unseen, or angels soft as air...
A silent sea, ....where mountains lend an ear
As clouds pile high, ....and wait to hear...
Only for this:  such peace....such bliss
A sound so small, ... as welcome as a sigh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Roberts Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 3:18 PM
Brilliant........Seren
Muideen Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 2:58 PM
A wonderful write, congratulation on your win.........A.M.
Cottrell Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 10:32 AM
Wow. I feel more at peace from reading this poem. Good job and congratulations on first place.
Torres Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 9:59 AM
Congratulations for winning on top ,Carrie! Excellent poem!! :O)
Lamoureux Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 8:08 AM
This is fantastic! I love the way you expressed this one.
Nance Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 7:30 AM
Wonderfully done! Many grats on your top spot, I enjoyed this!
Richards Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 10:06 AM
Thank you so much Casarah !!! Such an honor, and I'm so happy you enjoyed my poem! Such a joy to see your winner's list! Thank you !!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 8:09 AM
Excellent choice Casarah.
Inman Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 7:17 AM
Your sweet melody of silence cescendos in the last stanza. It is amazing how loud silence can be. Absolutely beautiful.
A  Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 1:19 AM
sweet win... SK
Manassian Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 12:02 AM
Carrie....this is a superb write....is alights softly on the soul...Beautiful...Congrats on your top win. You are so deserving.
Wigley Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 11:42 PM
There is a perfectly rational explanation as to why this poem came top of the pile, Carrie, and that is because it is simply brilliant. Love that last stanza. Well deserved congratulations, a #7 and a fave for me, thanks, Viv x
A. Sharma Avatar
July 30, 2015 at 11:04 PM
Brilliant take on the subject n a superb win Carrie! Congrats on top podium!
Kendrick Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 12:54 PM
Way to go..Silence can be dark, gray, blue for sure..Congrats..Sara
Gildersleeve Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 4:52 PM
Carrie a wonderful read. I so enjoyed the Color of Silence. Congratulations on your fine win. Warm hugs and smiles, Connie
A   Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 8:34 AM
a lovely and deep win....hugs
Ryerson Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 10:10 PM
Carrie - You name this free verse but what an awesome rhyme scheme you have created! If I'm not mistaken each verse has a different scheme with one un-rhymed line in each verse with the exeption of verse one and four?? WOW...Line four of verse two is an absolute stunner! NOBODY does it better...
Mehta Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 9:52 PM
Congrats on the win, Carrie
Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 4:00 PM
gosh, Carrie, you did yours so differently. You used different colors to portray one thing, instead of vice versa, to portray one color. Awesome writing. You are in top form here. Congrats.
Andresen Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 11:23 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in: "THE SOUND OF COLOR" contest: Sponsored by: Monterey Sirak - Nice to join and nice to read your poem Carrie. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Sirak Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 9:37 AM
Amazing poem! You meandered down a different path and wove absolute magic and peace into the silence. Stunning! Congrats and thank you so much for entering.
Brown Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 12:39 PM
Congratulations on your win in the wonderful contest Olajide sponsored "Color Blindness". You did yourself proud with your grand writing Carrie. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 10:22 PM
Carrie,, another wonderful win..congratulations...ps
Johnson Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 1:45 PM
Congratulations on your win, Carrie. Love, Joyce
Adelana Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 10:15 AM
You really have a very beautiful poem here. I'm sure the pen you used must be beautiful as well. Congratulation on your placement in Color Blindness contest.
Poet Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 7:37 PM
Whenever I read this poem I am amazed by your Poetic heart Carrie.I was reading my Fav poems now.I think this is one of the best poem I ever read.
Burnette Avatar
April 27, 2011 at 8:43 AM
Wow.... amazing poem i just wanted to stop by and let u know that ive read most of your poetry and the symbolism and wording is phenominal.
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