Premiere Contest WinnerThe Cobweb City

The cob web city sticks to your skin
as you pass through it jumbled strings
on its corners are hustlers 
and men with wigs wearing worn heels, selling their wares

Traffic moves slowly, like long crawling slugs
eyes get accustomed to waves of heat,
rising like dragons from the concrete streets
where scents drift from food carts fill 

Old men linger near drug stores, smoking cigarettes and coughing
the broke and lonely stop at every bar and chili parlor,
trying to fill empty pockets with pennies, lifted off the floors
sticking to the soles of society's shoes as a reminder,
that young is old, when left to fend for themselves
evil is a cold hand, never born from a gentle touch

Gray is a constant color when life becomes motion,
with unintended consequences, stopping long enough,
to disappear into the city's web
the people passing by see only shoulders and backs,
leaning against graffiti walls, trying to stay out of the rain
until locked doors open, at the shelter
 

contest Just Down the Road
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Smith Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 1:37 PM
Such sadness, so well defined, congratulations Frederic...
Gauthier Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 1:22 PM
Very touching description. Congrats on your first place finish,
Carber Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 10:35 AM
Very well written-- if Charles Dickens had written poetry, it might well have been in this vein--seeing the hard side of a rich society....
Hamilton Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 9:00 AM
Well deserved first place Frederic, instantly I was transported to that time and place by your amazing imagery.
Nance Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 7:37 AM
Wow really descriptive and good. good luck in the contest, this is a marvelous piece
Parker Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 12:35 PM
thank you Casarah for reading and for your kindness
Dietrich Avatar
May 4, 2014 at 9:32 PM
oh MY, a really sad one for that contest. You really took that theme to heart. It is so sad that so many people are homeless or living such horrible lives. a well painted picture of that drudgery.
Parker Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 12:34 PM
what's really sad is those in society we put in power, don't seem to care, they are not a voting block
Dietrich Avatar
May 4, 2014 at 9:30 PM
first I want to say, I'm glad you like my volcanic imagination!! Now to read your poem!!
Parker Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 12:32 PM
you are welcome, my poetic friend
Smith Avatar
May 3, 2014 at 10:25 PM
Very well done Frederic...Tim
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