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The Cobweb City Premiere Contest Winner

The cob web city sticks to your skin as you pass through it jumbled strings on its corners are hustlers and men with wigs wearing worn heels, selling their wares Traffic moves slowly, like long crawling slugs eyes get accustomed to waves of heat, rising like dragons from the concrete streets where scents drift from food carts fill Old men linger near drug stores, smoking cigarettes and coughing the broke and lonely stop at every bar and chili parlor, trying to fill empty pockets with pennies, lifted off the floors sticking to the soles of society's shoes as a reminder, that young is old, when left to fend for themselves evil is a cold hand, never born from a gentle touch Gray is a constant color when life becomes motion, with unintended consequences, stopping long enough, to disappear into the city's web the people passing by see only shoulders and backs, leaning against graffiti walls, trying to stay out of the rain until locked doors open, at the shelter contest Just Down the Road

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Date: 1/25/2018 1:37:00 PM
Such sadness, so well defined, congratulations Frederic...
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Date: 1/25/2018 1:22:00 PM
Very touching description. Congrats on your first place finish,
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Date: 1/25/2018 10:35:00 AM
Very well written-- if Charles Dickens had written poetry, it might well have been in this vein--seeing the hard side of a rich society....
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Date: 1/25/2018 9:00:00 AM
Well deserved first place Frederic, instantly I was transported to that time and place by your amazing imagery.
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Date: 5/5/2014 7:37:00 AM
Wow really descriptive and good. good luck in the contest, this is a marvelous piece
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/5/2014 12:35:00 PM
thank you Casarah for reading and for your kindness
Date: 5/4/2014 9:32:00 PM
oh MY, a really sad one for that contest. You really took that theme to heart. It is so sad that so many people are homeless or living such horrible lives. a well painted picture of that drudgery.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/5/2014 12:34:00 PM
what's really sad is those in society we put in power, don't seem to care, they are not a voting block
Date: 5/4/2014 9:30:00 PM
first I want to say, I'm glad you like my volcanic imagination!! Now to read your poem!!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 5/5/2014 12:32:00 PM
you are welcome, my poetic friend
Date: 5/3/2014 10:25:00 PM
Very well done Frederic...Tim
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