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The Clouds Are Not For My Eyes

I stand by - the clouds are not for my eyes. The fog, a light feather that tickles the air I breathe. I stand close to the dew, the dawn consumes. Oh Robin redbreast - your passionate diffuse on high! I stand apart, a sentinel in a shower. The force of words in crowds of two or threes. I don’t find the need to surrender my own, no need, but as the need arises the surprises they hold. I let go, as if doves are released, kisses from God on the sinciput. I anoint with oil, drawing a cross with my thumb on the forehead. Drawing each saint close so we can mutually hear - the hour’s hero, invisible but present. The disjointed saint is comforted. The clouds are not for my eyes. I look up to where He ascends. My face feels the dew of grace. My breath is measured; He knows each hair on my head. I stand by, close, apart - only by His will. I stand still. I stand for Him.

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Date: 10/23/2023 5:25:00 PM
Beautiful writing, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2023 6:05:00 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Date: 10/22/2023 1:11:00 PM
I love the metaphor you created here. Being detached and still and standing for Him....powerful words. I love 'my face feels the dew of grace.' It resonated with me. Enjoy your Sunday, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2023 6:05:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 10/22/2023 2:46:00 AM
Neither the earth nor the sky attract you now. You stand detached from all such ephemeral attractions and your eyes are poised on God, inhaling His living breath and enjoying His dewy grace. Beautiful dear Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2023 6:04:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa!
Date: 10/21/2023 9:43:00 AM
A lovely uplifting poem that flows so well.. so many positive lines in this one..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2023 11:01:00 AM
Thanks so much! I appreciate you, Silent! :)
Date: 10/21/2023 9:15:00 AM
Dear Kim, the devotional beauty of your poem takes my breath away. Your potent prayerful pen amazes! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/21/2023 11:01:00 AM
I appreciate your comment, Susan! Blessings to you!

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