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The Chook House

The chook house stood empty for most of my childhood. An enclosed corrugated iron shed was surrounded by a wire fence and a wooden gate held on by one rusty hinge. Inside was small and cramped, just big enough to hold a seven year old and keep out the rest of the world. Daddy long leg spiders guarded its inner twilight, webs were strung like trip wires to snare an unwary soul. Wounded I would seek refuge there, safe in its dark womb. Huddled in silence, only a thin umbilical of light connected me to the outside through a nail hole in the roof. No-one knew I was there. After seventy years I still preserve the space, keep it hidden in a corner of my mind. When the world gets too much I make myself small and go there.

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Date: 1/16/2024 8:38:00 AM
Oh, Paul. You write with such emotion, but subtly enough not to venture into teary territory. I feel your connection with that chook house, and you make it perfectly clear, despite the darkness inside, so that I see every spider web, and beam of light that shines through that nail hole. We all need a haven to where we can escape, even if now it's only found inside our memories. Pity, more people don't read you. Their loss.
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Paul Willason
Date: 1/17/2024 3:46:00 PM
Dear Lin, I thank you sincerely for your supportive comments. You have been a constant reader of my poetry and it is always a comforting thought to know that when I send my little children out into the world, they will be greeted by an appreciative few and that is enough. I am grateful and moved by your words.

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