The Cardinal and the Rose

Unsure of the wisdom of getting married that day,
the young woman stood in the garden
of her groom-to-be.
Rarely entirely confident of any big decisions,
she trembled underneath
her beautiful white sequinned wedding gown.

She pondered and pondered,
but anything bad that entered her mind
had barely any weight 
compared with all the good of the man she loved!

Suddenly her gaze fell upon the rose bush.
Although it was early November,
one passionately red rose still bloomed there,
tall and poised – ready for romance!
As if by fate, a brilliantly red cardinal
alighted nearby the rose and cocked his tiny head at her
as if mocking her for her foolhardiness.

She recalled that seeing a cardinal meant good fortune,
Smiling then, she turned enthusiastically,
headed for wedded bliss.

Jan. 6, 2023 
For Brian Strand's the 'SECOND CHANCE ' Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 1/18/2023 8:23:00 AM
Congratulation on your win. A wonderful write about her wedding day. I enjoyed this one. Have a blessed day.................
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Date: 1/14/2023 8:37:00 PM
A blissful memory indeed ~
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Date: 1/9/2023 1:25:00 PM
A delightful tale Andrea! Truly there are no coincidences only God appointments! This is a story of a wondrous miracle and answer to prayer! Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 1/7/2023 8:20:00 AM
- Like a little love story, Andrea... delightful poem - hugs
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Date: 1/7/2023 7:49:00 AM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Two beautiful things in nature brought together in a poem. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 1/7/2023 6:00:00 AM
Andrea, such a lovely and romantic scene you have crafted here with your beautiful words! The with the dress contrasted with the Rose and the Cardinal red is perfect! You have a winner here! Happy Saturday xxoo
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Date: 1/6/2023 7:53:00 PM
A romantic story indeed. "Here comes the bride..."
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Date: 1/6/2023 7:44:00 PM
In such a lovely way you have connected the story of the rose and the cardinal. The young bride in the garden, with mixed thoughts of anxiety and joy flashing through her beating heart has greater beauty than the lone red rose. All the best ,Andrea.
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Date: 1/6/2023 7:16:00 PM
Such a very lovely story. This one made my heart take flight. Poetic heart, so I am a sucker for romantic poems. Well done.
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Date: 1/6/2023 10:01:00 AM
Andrea, beautiful poem about the cardinal and the rose, love it, well done, Constance
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Date: 1/6/2023 2:32:00 AM
An awesome snippet of a life of a bride to be. Loved it. Hugs
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Date: 1/6/2023 12:06:00 AM
An interesting story, Andrea:)
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