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The Butterfly

blank verse Remembering the adage we were taught, in teamwork sports, cooperation counts. "The winners take no credit nor the loss." She briefly touches my left shoulder, then before I get my body turned around away she flies along the lane unseen. My eyes adjust, I see her head appear. Both arms together seem to pull the air as feet propel her like a dolphin's tail. My relay partner breathes on counts of three the most demanding stroke of all to learn, its own reward - to swim the butterfly. June 26, 2012

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Date: 6/24/2017 6:05:00 AM
The title took me along one path, but then you led me along an other, Reason! Both my nieces were national swimmers and often I had the pleasure watch them swim this stroke. Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 6/17/2017 5:27:00 PM
Great choice of topic for this well-written poem, Reason. Congrats on your win in my contest! Janice
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Date: 7/2/2012 3:55:00 PM
I sure love butterflys! ,love the poem congrates!
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Date: 6/29/2012 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#185" contest Reason. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2012 2:11:00 AM
reason congrats on your win...David
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Date: 6/28/2012 2:11:00 PM
What a neat way to describe the actions of a relay race in a pool. VERY nice. I would put it better than HM!!
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Date: 6/28/2012 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win ! LORI
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Date: 6/28/2012 8:43:00 AM
When I fisrt started reading I was imagining a butterfly and only at the third verse did I see the swimmer. After reading it several times, I can see the swimmer at the beginning. My duaghter used to swim competitively and I can still see her head and arms as you describe. Thank you.
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Date: 6/27/2012 3:33:00 PM
R.A.P., love your verse... congratulations with your awesome win, in Brian's contest..xox~PD
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Date: 6/27/2012 11:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Reason. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/27/2012 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your HM xx
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Date: 6/27/2012 4:35:00 AM
Beautiful poem... congrats on your HM... Terry
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