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The Broken-Hearted Ghost

He who stared at me with such sweet smiling blue eyes saw me later at college and let his gaze pass through me - the ghost with a broken heart.

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Sandra Haight

Date: 10/18/2017 8:49:00 AM

Andrea, just a small Tanka with huge imagery of a broken heart. Congrats on your Podium win! Hugs, Sandra

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 10/17/2017 10:21:00 PM

Best wishes and big congrats on your well-earned win, Andrea - keep up the great poetry, my friend! :-)

Constance La France

Date: 10/17/2017 1:26:00 PM

Andrea, wonderful, congratulations on your win in my contest !

Eve Roper

Date: 10/16/2017 9:10:00 PM

Awe, Andrea, love the write congratulations on your win hugs Eve

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/16/2017 5:01:00 PM

I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 2nd place win in the "Broken Hearted Poem contest ". It was well deserved-Alexis

James Inman

Date: 10/16/2017 8:39:00 AM

This is wonderful Andrea. I really liked this.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/15/2017 7:49:00 AM

Heartfelt Andrea...

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/14/2017 8:24:00 PM

WOW! Andrea, This is a good entry for the contest theme. I think you did what was required and more. In a few lines you hit it out of the park. I wish you the best of luck in the contest- Alexis

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/14/2017 7:25:00 PM

Wow, my heart broke just reading this! Beautiful poem!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/14/2017 7:09:00 PM

this is heart-wrenching, andrea! well done...

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/14/2017 7:08:00 PM

This is interesting. Who are you referring to here? Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/14/2017 6:49:00 PM

Short but to the point--best for a win Andrea!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/14/2017 5:30:00 PM

aww this is so sad Andrea, so few words say so much:-) hugs Jan xx