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The Boy Who Loved Himself

His reflection Mike saw in the pool.
"I could kiss myself I look so cool,"
bragged the boy, bending low.
In the pool he fell, so
what a wet kiss he got, the big fool.

Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2024

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Karen Jones Date: 8/27/2024 8:37:00 AM Back with belated congratulations on your win! Login to Reply

Terry Miller Date: 8/22/2024 2:04:00 AM congratulations, so funny! Login to Reply

Crystol Woods Date: 8/19/2024 6:27:00 AM Awe so cute! And humorous! Xo Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 8/18/2024 2:27:00 PM Water shows distorted reflections, so probably Mike looked better than usual :) Liked your creative 'wet kiss', Andrea! Congratulations on your fine win. // paul Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 8/18/2024 11:29:00 AM what a narcissist lol , many congrats on your win Andrea:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Karen Jones Date: 8/5/2024 11:03:00 PM Hahaha great limerick Andrea! Login to Reply

Nancy Kaufman Date: 8/3/2024 1:23:00 PM very cute Andrea.. Login to Reply

Mike Bayles Date: 8/2/2024 7:12:00 AM I like it, Andrea. Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 8/1/2024 2:10:00 PM Ha ha... that's what you get for being a narcissist. :) Login to Reply

Weston Gregory Date: 8/1/2024 11:54:00 AM A poignant symbolism of our time, like a shill for the trill, ends up in a spill. Very funny image but so relevant. Andrea, this is a good one. Login to Reply

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 8/1/2024 5:41:00 AM Dear Andrea, I loved your play on narcissism. It made me smile and chuckle this morning! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 8/1/2024 5:02:00 AM This is lovely and cool.... Andrea. The narcissistic boy had a dip in the pool though he didn't wish it. Obviously he had no intention to swim. Bending too low, he must have lost his balance. Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 8/1/2024 1:20:00 AM That's what you get by being a narcissus. Hugs. Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 7/31/2024 11:55:00 PM This write is slopping to the brim with your U'm-her Andeea..Well I wonder how the streets Are going to be today?? Not much positive news On drainstream channels I'll gather.? Lets hope And pray.! Login to Reply

Joe Dimino Date: 7/31/2024 5:53:00 PM His first wet kiss...the sanitizer protected him. Hope he learned a clean lesson. Login to Reply

David Kavanagh Date: 7/31/2024 1:17:00 PM Another Very clever and fun limerick on this caption Andrea, I honestly thought of writing one about Narcissus falling in love with his own reflection, but rhyme scheme wasn’t working out, you nailed this one, A top contender for sure, cheers David Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/31/2024 1:30:00 PM thanks so much, David

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 7/31/2024 11:37:00 AM Hello Andrea, i do agree. Hugs. /Darlene/ Login to Reply

Paige Hind Date: 7/31/2024 11:37:00 AM LOL this is sure cute! <3 Login to Reply

Jay Narain Date: 7/31/2024 11:21:00 AM nICE ONE. Login to Reply

Mike Gentile Date: 7/31/2024 9:53:00 AM Andrea, so cute is this!! And just be clear, that is not a childhood pic of me, lol! Good luck and Happy Wednesday xxoo Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/31/2024 1:27:00 PM haha