The Blue Sundress

As the long, frigid winter comes to an end She pictures a dress like none other- quite a vision! A sundress in her favorite color of sky blue Made of softest blue chiffon with mixed patterns Held in place by strap-like sleeves, and finest pearls And a fitting lower back cut, made to hug She smiles as in her mind she conceives They would have a quiet dinner at the sea shore Followed by casual dancing beneath the stars In the quaint, quiet gazebo hand made with white lattice Lit by whimsical lanterns swaying in the southern winds Which soften the mood to match the haunting sounds of the obo As the night grows deeper, wrapped warm in loving arms They’d stroll along the beach, two hearts finally at peace He would laugh as a soft, gentle wind billows her skirt Lightly brushing bare back as he steals a sweet kiss And lost to the world they'd be, amidst soft pounding of ocean surf Then spend the night in the dunes up on the hills to await The fiery glow of sun rise; welcoming a new and glorious day! ~*~
By Audrey For Constance's "Sundress" Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/9/2011 5:49:00 AM
Congratulation's on your fine win Annalise in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 4/8/2011 6:23:00 AM
Wonderful story, Annalise. Many congrat's on your win. Lainie
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Date: 4/4/2011 9:32:00 AM
Delighted to see your wonderful poem get the recognition it deserves, Dimples! Congratulations. Love, carolyn
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Date: 4/4/2011 7:11:00 AM
Wonderful write here Annalise!Congrats on your big win---kashinath
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Date: 4/4/2011 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Annalise in Constance La France's contest "The Sundress". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/3/2011 11:29:00 PM
glowing piece, dear anna.. keep the energy up! APPLAUSE for the sweet win.. :) huggs
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Date: 4/3/2011 11:18:00 PM
A lovely romantic piece and congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/3/2011 8:47:00 PM
Such a whimsical and magical picture penned thru your write Anna. Big Congratulations.
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Date: 4/3/2011 6:07:00 PM
Super congrats on this romantic & beautiful poem-- really liked how yours is blue-- goes so well with the water :D --wonderful poem, Annalise :)
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Date: 4/3/2011 6:06:00 PM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of constance, Annalise
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Date: 4/3/2011 5:45:00 PM
Congrats Annalise on your super win in the sundress contest with this awesome entry my friend.. wonderful write so enjoy your wonderful win with luv..
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Date: 4/3/2011 5:04:00 PM
Wonderful job Annalise, congratulations on your third place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/3/2011 4:02:00 PM
You have added such an element of romance to this lovely poem! Congratulations, dear Audrey!!
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Date: 3/27/2011 12:09:00 PM
Gosh, if a sundress can lead to such a romantic journey, maybe I need to buy one! Your poem has so many beautiful images -- really liked imagining the couple strolling along the beach after a seaside dinner. Love it, Annalise! Best wishes in Constance's contest, Carolyn
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Date: 3/27/2011 6:54:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Date: 3/26/2011 6:41:00 PM
so lovely..feels like one is right there enjoying the balmy shore with a loved one,,best of luck Annalise! love,Deb
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Date: 3/26/2011 5:58:00 PM
Very descriptive; good luck with the contest! Great ;ob!
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Date: 3/26/2011 5:47:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this very creative work that is so descriptive almost like being there.Reads like a sure winner to me...Sara
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Date: 3/26/2011 5:21:00 PM
Wonderful read and equally nicely interpretaed in words, Annalise
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