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The Best Gift

calm deeply rooted tree endlessly changing - gifting my eyes and soul The Best Gift Poetry Contest Written 30.12.22 Sponsor JCB Brul Awarded 1st place

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Eve Roper

Date: 1/5/2023 4:18:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. Many blessings to you

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/5/2023 11:23:00 PM

Thank you

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/4/2023 3:15:00 PM

Congratulations! :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/5/2023 11:24:00 PM

Thank you

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/4/2023 2:56:00 PM

Sounds like a family tree! Nice! Congratulations!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/5/2023 11:24:00 PM

Thank you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2023 1:26:00 PM

Beautifully worded. Congrats

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/4/2023 1:42:00 PM

Thank you

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/31/2022 12:46:00 PM

Profound and nicely crafted Monoku. Best wishes for the contest

Di11y Da11y
Date: 1/4/2023 1:42:00 PM

Thank you

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 12/30/2022 10:54:00 PM

Nature is lovely. A good poem. Well done.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/31/2022 12:11:00 AM

Thank you

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 12/30/2022 7:58:00 PM

beautiful thoughts, I gave mine up five years ago when we moved to a subdivision that as yet has few trees. But there's hope, some are being planted. I go by the old homeplace often to check on "my" tree. A great monoku.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/31/2022 12:11:00 AM

I moved a year ago and left behind my cherry blossom tree, which the new owners pulled out. Cherry blossom is a fleeting joy you wait for but worth it. There was a long line of trees on my morning commute that were beautiful to watch with changing seasons. I can still drive that way and I think next year I might purchase a cherry blossom tree I can watch grow.

Jim Slaughter

Date: 12/30/2022 11:16:00 AM

A tree is, indeed, a thing of beauty and a joy forever. BOL in the contest, D D.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 12/31/2022 12:11:00 AM

Thank you