The Beggar

an invisible weight on his back
his provisions all in a sack
  Had he ever paused
  to sing a song
as he made his rounds begging life long
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Krutsinger Avatar
December 17, 2021 at 8:01 AM
"his provisions all in a sack" - I like the sound of this; it has such a ssssss sound to it!
Proxenos Avatar
December 12, 2021 at 1:21 PM
Really very sad especially when it is any religious holiday, and we have plenty and they are empty! Such a crying shame. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Wolf Avatar
December 12, 2021 at 5:48 PM
It does seem so overwhelming with all the beggars at every street corner (in Chicago, anyway). I guess the way is to start with one. Help one. One at a time. :) gw
George Avatar
December 12, 2021 at 12:15 AM
His provisions on his sack and his burdens on his back.... ! Gershon, you have drawn a sad picture. But still he might sing! He must have enjoyed life at some points
Wolf Avatar
December 12, 2021 at 5:49 PM
Someone who can still sing is far from hopeless. At least, that's what my shower stall told me. :)
DiMino Avatar
December 11, 2021 at 7:58 AM
The joy of life, can be itself blessing enough to sing. We all have something of value to offer: as I have been told, God provides for even the birds, but He does not throw seed in their nests. Excellent write!
Wolf Avatar
December 12, 2021 at 5:51 PM
Interesting what you wrote: It seems that God brings food to baby crows, whose parents abandon them at birth. See Psalm 147 for evidence of same. Season's best, gw
Gentile Avatar
December 11, 2021 at 5:51 AM
I wonder GW, the stations in life we sometimes randomly hold!!
Wolf Avatar
December 12, 2021 at 5:54 PM
When we get to the 'World of Truth,' the roles will be reversed. 'The first ones now will later be last,' as Bob Dylan once wrote and sang it. :) gw
Baker Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 4:27 PM
Interesting question, GW. Never heard one a singing. Have a great day! Bill
Wolf Avatar
December 12, 2021 at 5:55 PM
Not yet, Bill. Not yet. There's always a first time, isn't there?! Season's best, gw
M  Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 3:39 PM
Oh Wershon that is a little ,sad and very meaningful poem. You are a clever man. Debx
Wolf Avatar
December 12, 2021 at 5:47 PM
Clever as ever, just not 'relatable or cute.' lol. thanks, Deb
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